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| "Cruel Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: liliesformary [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I, actually, really liked this, and I am not one prone to YAOI. I did notice a few instances where you could have broken a larger sentence up, intead of putting in a lot of commas, but it's a minor point. I didn't interrupt the prose very much (though in some places it may have aided it greatly). I really enjoy your style of writing, and I'm glad I went back in the ol' IY archives to find this. The lemon wasn't too much for me (sometimes an explicit lemon can be quite squick, despite the hotness of the participants), and the world you created around the characters, while not cannon, was believable and not prone to normal FanFic archeotypes. Overall, well done. (PS. I, too, believe that the fur thing is a stole, and not a tail. Though I believe that subject is still up for debate ;P)
| Reviewed By: dark_doggy111593 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR STORY WAS GREAT!!! Okay, anyway. This boa/tail is sort of hard to explain. Ahem... When Fluffy-sama is in his 'human form' the fluffy thing is a boa. (In the manga: Moko-Moko) But, when he's a 'dog' that becomes his shoulder fluff and tail. OK? (I HAD AN INTERVIEW WITH RUMIKO TAKAHASHI!! OKAY?!)
| Reviewed By: Blackat On: March 29, 2005 20:15 CST
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BITCH!!!!!!!! how could you do that in case u havn't noticed make-up(wrong!) HOT DEMON MARKINGS (RIGHT) BOA NO IT'S HIS TAIL u moron
| Title: *laughing her ass off*
Reviewed By: Cleodasia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 01:05 CST
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Thank you so much, to my lovely yaoi-loving reviewers. But to you, Inuyasha-lover, I must say this...YOU PEEKED!!! My darling, I didn't make Sesshy gay, HE IS GAY~ Was the makeup and boa not enough of a hint? Were the manicured nails and Pantened hair not a clue? Was the swish in his step...never mind. 'cause really, quite obviously, you're an idiot. As for killing me, that's a riot. I wish you would, then I could come back as one of my livelier incarnations and bludgeon your puppy ass with a kendo stick. As it is, I'm forced to listen to your raving, and allow the fact that you have a right to your opinion. Only next time, lovely, do have it somewhere else...
| Title: Inuyasha lover
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 17:28 CST
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I have not and will not read this story. How can you do that to Sesshy!! He is not gay!!! I used to only love Inuyasha but I am starting to love Fluffy. He is fine. *eyes turn red and I start to growl loudly* How dare you do that to him. If you do that to him again... or any inuyasha character -Kikyou/naraku/jaken/kanna (I don't give a fuck about them) then you die*becomes giant black dog with moon and star on head and destroys a nearby gay/lesbian story writer in warning for you*
| Reviewed By: Danni On: June 11, 2003 07:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! :) I almost cried when I read the ending part. ^_^ It is so touching. I love little sess a lot! And I also think his childhood is not very happy.He wanted to be loved but could not get it from his father. And I really interested in his mom. Is she a loving parent? I hope so! :D | Reviewed By: GreaterBeast_Xellas On: June 07, 2003 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im so glad that I finished this. It was cut off of AdultFanfiction.net. I still think that this is cute. The ending had me in tears, I wish that there could be more. I LOVED IT. | Reviewed By: Cleodasia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 15:40 CDT
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*laughing* damn, is it that bad? No review, not one?? *sniff* Oh well, I love it, and I wrote it for myself, so I guess it's all good. So to any readers who happen to read this, I hope you enjoyed, thanks for stopping by and reading! Das |
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