| "Addicted To You" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: Faye-Faye [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really love this ficcy!!!! Please keep going! Bring on the next chappy's please-please!!!! *Begs on knees*
I love these kind's stories!! |
Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 14:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
the person was hiei wasnt it................so obvious. i really like this fic this is really good work keep it up please update soon |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 21:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
That's really good, really sad. |
Reviewed By: Lita Starwind [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaawwww! poor hiei! I feel so sorry for him! I hope you continue this soon! Ja Ne! |
Reviewed By: oOkoimizuOo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! So sad. Poor poor Hiei. Can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI! Why isn't your update showing? It wont on my computer, at least... I LOVE ADDICTED TO YOU!! I BOW DOWN TO YOUR FEET FOR WRITING IT AND I AM DIEING BECAUSE I AM NOT SEEING ANY MORE OF IT!!! UUUUUPPPPPPDDDDDAAAAAAATTTTTTTEEEEEEE!!!!!!
If you want me to stop reviewing, I will... Just tell me to in the next chapter or email or something... I just really cannot help it ^_^ I will shut up, if ya want... UPDATE! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE I LOVE THIS STORY I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have to go, but UPDATE!! I know you said you did, but it is not showing up! Is there something wrong with your computer and it wont allow you to update? Curse that computer if it is! Sorry, I NEED MORE! Ok, I leave now. I will shut up and kindly allow you UPDATE!
***Otaku~Hoshi, one of Hiei X Kurama's biggest fans. You have to like them, they are cute, wonderful, and look great together***
P.S. I used my full sign off this time, see? |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 19:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! Another chapter!! Hmmm what is the reason for his name being egg, I'm curious after I read your note here. Cute ending of the chapter. |
Reviewed By: Hiki-Chan On: June 30, 2003 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*waves*KONNICHIHA!!!it is i your friend reviewing your fic on mediaminder o.o. just thought i'd do this cause i felt like it^^ ANYWHO! love ya stories, really really i do and you know it, lol keep it up or you get zukizuki-.- waiii! wovely stories^^!lol baibai!
-Hiki-chan |
Reviewed By: Youko-Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 11:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for reviewing *ahem* every CHAPTER of my story,WhiteCryingDragon! It's actually very cute I enjoy very much reading what you Hiei and Kurama have to say *wink wink*.
In response to some of the questions I have been getting: YES, I KNOW I have mountains of spelling errors in my stories and once again, this is because I either do not have time to spell check, or I am using my home computer which does not have a Word program with spell check therefore I have to do the checking on my own and sometimes I miss some. *takes a deep breath*
Also, there will be fluff and other yaoi-stuff in this story (this includes a very possible lime which I have already written and should show up later on). Give Hiei and Kurama some time okay? It's only the first day! >.<
We will focus completely on Hiei/Kurama and their personal lives, I am just setting the mood and atmosphere details first.
Also, I would never intentionally insult the totally-awesome Hiei for the sake of a good laugh. There IS a good reason for his last name being "Tamago". *winks*
-Saku |
Reviewed By: WhiteCryingDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwww...sososo cute! ^.^ At least Hiei isn't being a complete bastard...
Hiei: Hn.
Kurama: Will he ever talk to me like I'm a friend?
Abby: Dunno, have to ask the author.
Hiei: Hn.
Kurama: Hiei? What's wrong?
Hiei: Hn.
Abby: ...
Hiei: Hn.
Okaies...write more sooooooooooooooon! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: WhiteCryingDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!! That was great!
Hiei: Did I say that?!
Kurama: Yes, you did!
MOOOOOOOOOORE NOW! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: WhiteCryingDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! Goodie chappie! Sooo glad that there is more to read! ^.^
Hiei: I have a gay last name.
Kurama: No you don't...I acually like it...
Abby: Hiei, is there something you won't critize?
Hiei: Yeah...the way Kurama looks.
Kurama: ::blushes::
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW...MORE! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! It is me, Otaku Hoshi again. I LOVE THIS STORY, I JUST HAD TO TELL YOU AGAIN!!! This is my very favorite fanfiction. I have printed out every chapter ^_^ I like Yang! At first, when I found out you were gonna be using your own made up characters, I thought I would not like it as much. But, you proved me wrong! Yang is cool. Well, this story is gonna have yaoi, eh? WHEN??!!!?!?!?! I NEED TO KNOW!!! Sorry, if the yaoi is between Hiei and Kurama, I will deffinetly read ^_^ I love everything about this story, except that your chapters are a bit to short. But, I can understand if you don't want long chapters or something. It is fine, I just wanted to tell you that when I see you updated, I read right away, after crying happy tears ^_^ but, then they are so short, and it leaves me wondering!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bye-Chu!
**********Otkau~Hoshi
P.S. Please read my fanfiction as well! I wrote Hiei And Kurama's Adventures, We'll Never Know..., and YYY-Yu-Yu-Yasha. My username is obviously LOVER-OF-HIEI ^_^ So, please r/r all three, I would be so happy, because you are the author of Addicted To You, which is the greatest fanfic I have ever read. |
Reviewed By: WhiteCryingDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAAAAAAAAY! You updated! ^.^ I'm going to review every chapter you just put up caaaaaaaaause I really need to practice my reviewing skills on this site.
Hiei: You can say that again
Kurama: laughs
Abby: HEEEEEEEEEY!! I am getting better! ^.^
Hiei: Riiiiiiiight...just like how you've become better with keeping up with your glasses...BAKA!
Kurama: That wasn't very nice, Hiei...
Hiei: Hn.
Abby: Anyways, this was a great chapter (wish I could have seen Hiei and Kuwabara fight ^_____^) and I believe your only weakness is grammer and spelling...but don't worry! That's mine too! ~.^
Hiei: No, you have many weaknesses. Like say, how you can't manage to shut your mouth-
Kurama: Hiei, you're being really rude...
Abby: Thank you Kurama! ^.^
Nowwwwwwwwwww...next chapter! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 23:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lol awesome, awesome. Thanks for posting Kurama's schedule, that makes it easier to keep track of what's going on. =) When are Kuwabara and Hiei gonna fight? Hehehe. I like Yang, he's funny. |
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