| "Addicted To You" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: WhiteCryingDragon On: June 17, 2003 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Ummmm...I'm sorta new at this rating stuff so I'm going to do the best I can...well...ummm...
Hiei: God, you suck at this Abby!
Abby: SHUT UP!
Kurama: Maybe Hiei was right; you should stay with fanfiction.net.
Abby: But-
Hiei: Hn. Baka!
Kurama: Sooo...when am I going to start flirting? And is there going to be any fluff?
Hiei: Yes...fluff good...
Abby: ::sighs as she leaves lovers to 'discuss':: Hopefully you'll write more as soon as you can! Hope the review helps!
Hiei: That is if she did it right...
Kurama: ::laughs:: |
Reviewed By: Ro On: June 14, 2003 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a fun fic! I like! I like! Now, not that I'm pressuring you or anything, but if you don't update I'll DIE!!!!!!!!! ^_^, Heh, sorry, I won't die, I promise...just update! Update! Feeeeeeeeeed Me! 'Kay I'm done now, keep it up! Later ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Otaku Hoshi On: June 08, 2003 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY GOOD!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! PLEASE KEEP WORKING ON IT!!! I AM DIEING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!! This is so cool. I am going to read it to all of my friends, and I am going to read it 100 times myself. I LOVE IT!!! UPDATE IT ALL THE TIME!! AND MAKE IT A NICE LONG STORY!!!!!!!!! Anyway, it says to say why I rated it those things.. I love your style of writing, so a 10, the spelling and gramor isn't so good however, so an 8, the creativity is so good. I would have NEVER thought about makinga whole new story, just with same characters. It is so good!!! And, the overall rating is 10, because this is my new favorite fanfiction, and especially because I love the Hiei and Kurama pairing. very good.
Bye-Chu and keep up the good work!!!
**************Otaku~Hoshi |
Reviewed By: Bakuras lady On: June 07, 2003 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is god fanfic please continue.(Kuramas a SEXY man)!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heehee... I can't help it. This is Otaku Hoshi again. I LOVE YOUR STORY SO MUCH I CAN'T EVEN TELL YOU!!!!!! I cannot wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!! I screamed when I first read it. 'This is the story I have been looking for!' I thought. Jeez, I love it!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON IF NOT SOONER!!!!!!!!!! Bye-Chu!
*************Otaku~Hoshi |
Reviewed By: little youkai On: June 06, 2003 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh heh heh!*chuckle chuckle* GUESSE WHO????Heh. Anyways. Lookie, I found your story. Even though I've read it already. I recognized the name. And don't think that I'm going to forget about the fact that you pushed me into the lockers. Like come on Kurama. You're not suppost to do that when other people are around. Sheesh. And you call yourself a lover. Baka. Anyways, g2g finish reading other stories. LOL. By the way. ^^I like this story. |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 08:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter, it builds up the suspense more |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great dialogue, I love it (^_^) All in all, I'm enjoying this! |
Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 19:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
ahh man i was hoping for some action. o well so far this is a pretty good story please get more soon and you have to have at least one chapter where hiei and kuwabara fight. you can probably tell now that i wanna see kuwabara's smart ass get kicked by someone other than yusuke lmao |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 13:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I wanna see Kuwabara and Hiei fight!! =) Great story, it's fun to read! |
Reviewed By: mocha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 19:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, only a few mintues ago i reviewed for one of your other stories. i love school stories! post the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: kaisei41 On: May 31, 2003 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. This is a very cool story, there are not many stories out there that follow this sort of story line. Where is Kuwabara? I can't wait to meet the rest of the cast as see how their roles fit in. *snicker* Hiei is shy!! |
Reviewed By: WhiteCryingDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 10:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hiei: Wow, a schedual...
Abby: ::puts duct tape on Hiei's mouth::
Hiei: HUUUUUUUUUUUUM!!!!!!
Kurama: ::smirks::
Abby: GoooooooooooooooooD! That was so nice of yout to keep us informed! Nowwwwwwwww....chapter time! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: sunrissa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
U uploaded chp 3 2X. I did that on my fic, no biggie. hey, disregard my email ot U aobut converting the fic to .txt. I was only on chp 2 when I sent it. still a good fic. |
Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI On: July 03, 2003 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Just telling you you need to update! You are TAKING TO LONG! *goes and hits head on a wall* ARG!! I MUST READ MORE!!! Anyway, I am at my best friends house right now, and I have thought up two new fanfics for me to write! I will have you read them as well *snickers* Sorry, I am kinda sad right now. So, I act evil to hide it. When are you going to read and review my stories? Not to mention update your own... You update, and it is so wonderful, and then it leaves me wondering... You never did answer my e-mailes either. :( Did I do something or say something wrong :'0 I really didn't mean to.
Anyway ya need to update, I am going insane. I read you story as soon as you update it, along iwht wo other fanfics that I watch closely. I like them a lot, but not as much as Addicted To You. I love those ones, but I like this one a bit more. PLEASE update soon. PLEASE return my e-mailes. PLEASE r/r my stories. PLEASE UPDATE, FOR ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM DIEING!! I am very sad, and I feel like crying. I hate my sister... PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE YOUR STORY, WITHOUT IT I CANNOT GO ON!! g2g, Bye-Chu!
************Otaku~Hoshi
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