| "Accidental Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: June 03, 2003 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My God this is your first fic? O_o This is awesome. Mel was right...you do have an incredible way of telling a story. Adding Veggie's mom was a nice touch and so was reawakening my hatred for Frieza and his asshole cronies. Great job ES ^_^. I can't wait to read your updates and if you decide down the road to do a mailing list pls add my name to the bunch. It's suenami927@yahoo.com. Kudos for a grand effort :D. |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 20:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
First time, you say? Amazing...
You have a mastery of story-telling that left me feeling like I was sitting at the feet of my grandfather as he spun tales of my Scottish ancestors.
I felt bile rise in my throat as you described the decimation of the King and Elites and the ensuing battle between Vegeta and Frieza. I could practically hear Frieza's sibilant voice as he taunted the poor child. The addition of the "mother" was especially poignant.
Great job so far, kiddo! The next time you update, I'm going to get some popcorn and settle in!
If you decide to create an update list (I bet you're going to need one!), I'd love to be added to it. |
Reviewed By: InDiGo GeM On: June 02, 2003 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start!!! Damn good, infact, I'm curious to kmow why no one has reviewed...maybe just waiting 4 more chapters...whatever. So I'll take the initiative. Anyways, keep at it, love the way u write, love the way Vegeta is depicted. Don't 4-get to up date ^.~! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear God you're good!!! I'm no B/V fan - but I know a well crafted story when I read one! This is excellent, especially for a first fic! I'll be looking out for future installments... |
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