| "Brainwashed" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: dark-drizzt On: August 23, 2004 07:47 CDT
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what samurai-asehes says is right, it was VERY dbz,i think if he'd gone hyper, that would have been more sonic's style, speaking of which how DID they turn super? where were the c.emeralds???. great story but WAY too many plotholes, perhaps you should write a revised version of this fic??? 0_o
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Reviewed By: hrtsuhsrtuh On: July 09, 2004 18:25 CDT
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Erm, I'm really sorry if I sound mean, but I can just never se Amy and Sonic as boyfriend and girlfriend. I mean, Sally and he are in love. I'm sorry, but Amy is also only twelve. Next time you write a fic, get your facts straight.
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: Just Another Guy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 06:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic I Always thought that something like that would happen but no ever wrote something about it it's about time any way way cool fic i'll read the sequel so Just Another Guy sayin peace out
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Reviewed By: Sonicfan On: November 22, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is hot!!! I liked this story the most out of all the others i read. I think it is a good idea to make a sequal to this fic. Mikey you have great talent and creativity. I want you to right more.
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Reviewed By: samurai-ashes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're style of writing is good, though you might want to invest in a proofreader [person, not mechanical, as you didn't seem to have very many technical errors] of some sort; the biggest error I noticed was the mix-up of "groan" and "groin." I think the story was sort of... I dont know, very wham-bam! Everything happened so fast, you couldn't really get into the emotion of the moment; everyone's emotions were changing so quickly to match the pace, methinks. I think the story definately had some potential for intense emotion, too. Overall, it wasn't a bad fic. I think I probably would have gotten into it more if I were bigger into the Sonic fandom, but I'm not much into it, so *shrug*. I have to admit, that super form thing had an almost DBZ feel to it... no offense intended, since I have no clue how you feel about DBZ... yea, that's my 10 cents. - ashes -
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Reviewed By: Yami Hamtaro [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great start! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Yoshimi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was amazing. Mikey B23 writes the best stories ever! I am glad Shadow was willing to sacrifice himself in order to save his enemy/friend. I am a really big Shadow fan and I think that if you write a sequel he should come back, somehow...
And Mikey, if there's a flamer, and you want to insult them, (for whatever reason) ask me for ideas! I wouldn't even think of flaming your stories. |
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 13:51 CDT
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Please...I beg of you people: No flames! Thank you. |
Reviewed By: GogetaSS7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks good so far. (About time!) lol |
Reviewed By: Jiece18 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 23:40 CDT
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Great Start. Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Jiece18 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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This story sounds completly sick and twisted. So far I like it. I say you should try writing it. |
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 15:50 CDT
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Mikey B23 here!!! I will OFFICIALLY start this fic today!!!! Thank you for being patient with me! |
Reviewed By: Hoshi On: June 11, 2003 15:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please do the story! It sounds like a good plot. |
Reviewed By: annomylous On: June 09, 2003 17:21 CDT
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hey this sounds like its gonna be a good story, and i like your other stories their great. hope to read this story soon |
Reviewed By: rouge_the_bat On: June 28, 2003 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was the dumbest waste of time ever in the history of MANKIND! stick to the hillarious outtakes. you seem to be really really good at them. now i can't paint so i stay my ass out of the craft stores. and if shadow raped amy, you would have judy jetson. think about it. the kid would be nuttier than woody woodpecker. you would either get a spastic judy jettson, or christopher lowell. so i'm just saying this story, it's a set up for a BIG BIG BIG disaster. just a little warning. if you don't think so than e-mail me your gripes. you should know my e-mail by now. |
