| "Fun At The Beach When Its Night" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: ProjectShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: jshadowcat90@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: joei On: July 27, 2004 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was ok but i just want to know why you didn't use their names it drove me crazy and i really want to know why please send me an email!
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Reviewed By: dark necrofear On: July 04, 2004 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
you sucked like hell i've seen better stories from my friend. of course i won't say her name at least i gave her story a 10 in enjoyment plus it made me HORNY.at least you should be more creative.
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Reviewed By: marik worshiper On: July 02, 2004 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to be a little HARSH,but that story sucked.i even got a head ache from trying to figure out who was talking O__o. u might wanna learn how to use names if your gonna write more stories. but other than that it came out of pure originality,but im serious LEARN HOW TO USE THEIR NAMES!!!!!!!!!!their names arent HE o.k. Oh and like i said sorry for being harsh,but its the TRUTH.(insert blush with hand behind head).^.^
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Reviewed By: the twited bich from hell On: February 20, 2004 22:02 CST
Comment/Review:
good for two hors of work and no I can't spell deal with it
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, but I couldn't even get through a single paragraph! You NEED to work on your grammar! |
Reviewed By: Kuroi Bara no Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2003 13:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I agree with the strange not using names thing. So if you make a sequel you may want to use something other than dark and light. |
Reviewed By: Kale On: June 05, 2003 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry but your spelling and grammar usage were so bad that I couldn't even enjoy the story.
I don't mean to point out the negatives but it also didnt flow together. On the plus side it was pretty orignal. |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 08:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not Bad. A little strange not using names... but I got it. It got kinda confusing though at times. Good work though |
