| "Self Deception" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Kawaii-Rin su On: March 27, 2005 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there, just wanted to say, oh my GOD, GREAT STORY!?!?! I was wondering, when you were going to update, I'm sorry but the story is SOOOOO addicting to me. When I first read it, I was shocked, never in my life had I read such a story, I like stories with romance and mysterious stuff happening. In this case though, this story suppass anything I've ever read, I hope you update soon, I've been noticing you have not updated yet, and it really displeases me, and I'm sure a lot of other people are too. I mean you have reviewers right? So please don't put us down, and please don't let such great work become waste. I really hope you read this soon, I have also checked, adult fanfiction.net and you had your story there as well, I don't know if it's just my computer. But there are a few errors in all the stories I'm reading in adult fanfic. I was hoping maybe you may check it out please. And I was hoping you add your story to Fanfiction.net, if I like this story this much, there is no reason why others would not. And there are a lot of viewers in Fanfiction.net, I just wanted to suggest this to you, since your work is so god like. At least to me, I love writing, but when it comes to writing a STORY, don't come asking me. I hope you are safe and sound, stress-free and having a nice day. Because everyone knows you need a refreshing mind to make something great, and let you tell you your vocabulary is certainly something. It makes my sister's big lectures look bad. ^_^ bye
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Reviewed By: animefan596 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really REALLY like ur story and I noticed tat u havent updated in a really really REALLY long time (almost a year 0_0) I really hope u continue writing cuz this story is one of the best I've read in a really long time. Update soon.... plzzz?
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Reviewed By: SakuraBaby [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! How could you not update for so long this story is so grand!Well I hope a miracle happens and you do update soon
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Reviewed By: animegirl007 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is good.....I love everything about it....I need more.....UPDATE SOON PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Noi_Z On: December 21, 2003 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are u gonna update? Please be soon cos i love this fic!!!!
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Reviewed By: Anime Otaku A-chan On: September 10, 2003 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a-chan |
Reviewed By: Electric Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. |
Reviewed By: Bsasami On: August 22, 2003 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for awhile for this story to start up again. YES! I won't say hurry up, but I would say can't wait for the next chap. |
Reviewed By: sessrin2003 On: July 06, 2003 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy, can we say hurry up with the next chapter! I can't wait. boy you have me wanting to read it over and over. 0 0
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Reviewed By: kagome14 On: June 29, 2003 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, I love Sesshoumaru/Rin stories...and I cant wait to see what you do with everyone else...update soon, PLEASE!! |
Reviewed By: Bsasami153 On: June 15, 2003 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read your story and is excellent. Like some writers here in Mediaminer.Org which writes interesting stories. Hope you update very soon. |
Reviewed By: kin On: June 10, 2003 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story! I just love Sesshoumaru/Rin fanfics! I enjoyed every word of the story! Please write more. Please e-mail me if you ever update. It's cucdo221@msn.com |
Reviewed By: Angel On: June 08, 2003 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were only a couple of spelling errors, but nothing big. Now I have to say...
I TOTALLY LOVE THIS!!!!! When you update, PLEASE e-mail me. My e-mail address is garnet02114@yahoo.com. Hurry up and update! This is sooooo good! I love the plot and everything! What is Sess going to do to Rin? I hope nothing bad. Perhaps he can just fall in love with her! ^_^ Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Zorro On: June 05, 2003 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH! What a great story! Sesshomaru/Rin fics haven't been getting any better lately, but i love what you've done in this story! I love the Miroku/Sango romance in this to, and i hope Inuyasha will make his apperance soon! Update soon, please!
* This is Sesshomaru/Rin fic, right? |
