| "New Dawn Of The Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: nating1 On: November 30, 2004 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its okay.. but you should make them a bit more of a couple! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kayzer76th [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Excellent, I like your story very much. Taki and Sophitia's relationship is very poignant and painful at the same time. I just wondering if they could make it...also you put the Lizardman as the good guy. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Tortie-chu On: December 26, 2003 01:42 CST
Comment/Review:
This is very interesting but it lacks something very important. That something would be commas, yessir. Lot's of 'em, and in all the right places. There's are so many cool ideas in this it's a shame the punctuation is wrong, disrupting the flow of the sentences.
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Reviewed By: regie27 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 19:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Glad to see your story here! As I said on ff.net, the story keeps getting more interesting with each new chapter. Hope to see a new chapter soon. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: D Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great story. |
Reviewed By: Starx On: June 19, 2003 00:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is very interesting.
Good writing. |
