| "Shadowed Intentions" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Jeshone On: September 30, 2003 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool Duke Devlin is a one of the vampires rock on, but one could suppose that him being a bloodsucker in that particular AU would greatly impede his ability to create Dungeon Dice Monsters. The grammar was great and you really drew me into the story.But ma'am I have a question I have been thinking through all the previous Yugioh Fanfics I have read and I have never seen a Jou/Isis story or a Mai/Anzu with just Anzu or possibly Mai as well being a raging lesbian. Also what about a story where either Bakura or Malik are girls, I am just curious keep up the good work, uh, your writing kicks total ass
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Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: August 24, 2003 15:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lemme gess...Malik and Marik right? |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: August 24, 2003 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VAMPIRES CAN"T GO OUT IN LIGHT, YOU MUSH-FOR-BRAINS!!(Just joking. You have brains for brains.I hope) |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 19:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
This sounds really interesting so far. I hope you post more. As for who the shadow are . . . my guesses are the first one is Jou and the second one is Otogi. Anyway, post more soon so I can find out. |
Reviewed By: Jeshone On: June 04, 2003 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woah, mysteriousness goodness |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 08:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmmm...Emerald eyes... not too sure but i bet that the other is one of the following: Yami (my first choice) Yuugi (yeah, right) or Ryou (uh huh, sure.) Any who I think that duke emerald eyes, umm or at first i thought it was Bakura, but the two of them have beautiful brown eyes. Oh, except in the Manga (i think, i havent ever read the manga, but you learn stuff after a while...) anywho, thats all nice and stuff but hurry up so i can find out!! |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: June 03, 2003 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update.this is all i can think of to say about the story |
