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Title: To Remember
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story.I hope Naraku and Kagome do get together.Keep up the great work and catch ya later.
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Reviewed By: Youkerie On: April 03, 2005 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually prefer Sess/Kag fics, but I have been searching for a good Nar/Kag one. But secretly I might add, if my sister were to find out I long for Nar/Kag...I would die a slow and painful death. No one defies SesshouMaru, as she puts it. But i must say this actually going quiet nicely. I love the plot i cant wait until you update. ( ~ ' . ' ~ )
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Title: Update!!
Reviewed By: PyRo_hottie2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Frickin' awesome =^ 0 ^= You put a spin on the characters I never would have thought of... and a gothic Naraku sounds hot... *drools a bit* ... *cough, cough* Sorry >_>;; Anyway, I like the way you started to structure the story. I think you over did the dramatic bit and didn't make them react real... um, real^^;; Still believeable though. Gahh... I can't spell. So, I only have one problem with the story. UPDATE!! If you can't think of where to take the story, jsut ask me ^^;; Or if you've canceled, I'd be happy to pick it up again. I really do love this story line ^ - ^
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Title: valene
Reviewed By: valene [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 08:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story but are you going to continue it or not...?
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
very interesting story I anto=iouly await more
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Reviewed By: Dark Topaz [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 07:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are very few of these around because well you know...Anyways I love this! I've never read a Naraku/ Kagome fic before because they normally suck but this one is good! Keep up thw work!
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Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: September 13, 2003 22:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love this fic! It is so kickass! Update! update! Update! |
Title: please update soon!
Reviewed By: InuyashaxGurl On: September 11, 2003 06:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE THE STORY SOON CAUSE I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! YOU ARE REALLY GOOD SO KEEP UP ALL THE GOOD WORK! |
Title: hurry
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaruboi On: September 10, 2003 21:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Need more continue please. |
Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Helen On: September 09, 2003 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, here's the thing, when I read the first chapter I wasn't too how should I say intrigued. But then I reread you memo in the beginning stating that this was to be a Kagome and Naraku fic and that made me do a 180. So, please update soon. You're one of a handful of authors who have the guts to do such a fic. Ja ne. |
Reviewed By: Paige2 On: September 03, 2003 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am really enjoying this fanfic!!!!! please please please cont.!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2003 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This story is so great, I love it! I love the way you made Kikyou so evil and bitchy and Naraku is so wicked cool!!!Please update soon, or I will send a billion angry hamsters to get you!
^_~ Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: August 30, 2003 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the description of Kikyo. It's perfect! I can so see her as a slutty stuck up snobby cheerleader! I haven't ever seen a story like this one, very original. I love this story! Please write more!!! It's is so awesome! Update! |
Reviewed By: Inferno_66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I demand you complete this story! What am I doing telling you this? SO you know that I like it! Damn! You have a great storyline going, so if you won't finish it, then I demand that you allow someone to finish it for you! (hint hint) |
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaruboi On: July 11, 2003 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that u are really good. I hope to read what happens next. It sounds really interesting and what would Naraku do with Kagome? I really want to know and I think other people wants to know too. |
Reviewed By: Skie On: July 09, 2003 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep going! there are way too few nar/kag fics out there! love the story too by the way |
Reviewed By: Darby Thomas On: July 06, 2003 22:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good God, i read this, i was skeptical, but this thing, its just so...
i'll put it nicely: unpalatable.
this won't be an all out flame, you have the ideas, just not...the background knowledge:
1. Naraku is a freak , NOT a goth. you have you stereotypes mixed up. goths are more like the suicidal loner type, freaks are the mansonites scaring the church-going hypocrites and blemishing the goth name (not that i'd know or anything...no really, i don't).
2. The accident occured on campus, correct? Standard procedure is to notify the parents to get the insurance worked out (derived from personal experience).
3.Naraku JUST hit her in the face? JUST? I know punches to the face hurt, but that's not standard freak m.o. We're talking black eyes, a couple of punches to the gut, and a death threat at LEAST (also derived from personal experience...portray it right otherwise future victims like myself will get the wrong idea of what to expect.)
i want to stress, though the amnesia thing is kind of cliche and soap opera-ish, you still have a lot of good ideas, very creative too. This fic isn't that bad for an eleven year old trying to portray high-school life. good work kid. :) |
Reviewed By: Dark Angel On: June 28, 2003 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u should update all the chaps all ready because u are up 2 chapter like 12 i think or higher at fanfiction.net are u going to cont. w/the story here or what??? |
Reviewed By: Kilala36 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 14:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: 4U2NV On: June 17, 2003 09:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! You don't find many fanfics with a Naraku/Kagome pairing and those that you do find aren't that interesting. But your fanfic isn't so bad. I rather like this. Please continue and Update soon. |
Reviewed By: shao On: June 14, 2003 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great idea! when i first saw it i was kind of skeptical but it is sooo good. write more!!!! |
Reviewed By: Queen of the Wrorld On: June 13, 2003 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was awsome, please update soon? i usally hate Naraku/Kagome fanfics, but i think this one will be pretty good! please update soon |
Reviewed By: MIAKAYUUGI On: June 13, 2003 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fanfics .. yo . keep writing because it is great and your stories r great omg i love them ... u r a writer.. ill say it again your stories r great so keep writing |
Reviewed By: ills On: June 13, 2003 14:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
kool contiune! |
Reviewed By: I LUV IT!!!! On: June 12, 2003 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect 10 plz hurry up & update this gr8t story I am just dyin 2 no wht will happen next make Inuyasha's heart break in2 a thousand pices & make him cry for wht he did 2 poor Kagome. I no i'm evil oh well :) |
Reviewed By: TrAcEy On: June 08, 2003 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i totally luv this story plz plz plz hurry up and up date asap xoxo
TrAcEy :] |
Reviewed By: err....... On: June 05, 2003 17:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it
but i gotta complain
kagome does not have blue eyes its chocolate brown well anyway i love the story keep it up |
Reviewed By: tessa On: June 04, 2003 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good.....I hope you continue this. It would be a shame if you do not finish |
Reviewed By: Kokonutsu On: June 04, 2003 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found it really interesting and a gothic Naraku? Classic, i do hope you will continue because i'm hooked now. |
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