| "Bothers Him the Most" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: evilbarbiecar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 17:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
i liked this, thats the bad thing, we are all gonn burn in hell for these fics
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Reviewed By: Alexi Serenitia On: July 11, 2003 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okusama KK!! It's Alexi. ^.^ You made my day. I've been looking for Noa/Mokuba rape (I am such a demented girl), and I found it! ^_^
This was very good. I feel sorry for Noa and Mokuba as well, especially the latter. This was very good. I liked it, and it was written well. The only thing that bothered me was...
1) The Random Japanese
and
2) Mokuba called Seto "Onii-san", I think. Doesn't Mokuba call Seto "Nii-sama?" I could be wrong...
But anyway, I liked your evil twisted fic! Write MORE! *Everyone gasps*
And now, I shall wait 100000000000 years to continue my RP with Alena and/or DL that is Noa/Mokuba. o.O;;; Yeeeesss... I am a strange one.
~Alexi~ |
Reviewed By: Shin Yu On: June 28, 2003 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
POOR MOKUBA!!!! *water falls* ;(
Well any ways, Please right more?
Please? ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lady Love On: June 25, 2003 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!
LL: Ooh... This is good... ^^ Hehehe... The lemon was pretty good... But the story was really good... I say you do a sequel! LOL! Gotta go! Ja ne!
~LL |
Reviewed By: Sakura Kaiba On: June 03, 2003 21:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wauuuhhhh....(Don't ask). Very nice. Have never read one before, so much fun. Not really any OOc-ness. Nice job. I like. |
