| "Brock's Love: Maiden of the Dastardly Dr. Rage" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: mood music
Reviewed By: Yangyang aka Tenshi-senpai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 14:46 CST
Comment/Review:
BTW, while I was reading the BrockxOC lemon scene, i was listening to this song (I Can't Help falling in love with You) by A*Teens, and it worked really well together! Great timing and everything! Anyway, this story's great so far...can't seem to put it down for a sec! :)
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Title: BrockxOC lemon
Reviewed By: Yangyang aka Tenshi-senpai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, do you know how HARD it was to find a BrockxOC lemon?!! I've seen a lot of AshxMisty lemon, but...WOW...you really made my day with this one! Arigato Gozaimasu! ^v^ (adds to Favs)
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Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC (not logged in Mediaminer user) On: February 05, 2004 10:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good, as a writer myself, I see that you put a lot of effort into this, It was very good, I plan to read the next series, when I locate it.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Tallus On: October 23, 2003 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brock finally gets some love! It's quite a task trying to get through this in one sitting but you told a great story! I like how you got us into the head of Brock as a sensitive guy who wants to love!
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Reviewed By: Tallus On: October 23, 2003 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's the song you used for Chapter 11?
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Reviewed By: An idiot On: July 07, 2003 22:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I figured that you had this on ff.net as you put in 'click on the go button' or something like that. Well, I thought that you updated really fast or at least wrote really fast until I got to the chapter where you mentioned that you basically had put this on this site at that point. Though, I also figured that Dr. Rage was Liz's father because of the fact that I couldn't think of another reason why there would be a girl that hadn't gone through puberty living in his home when his wife died. However, I'm sure that there were some who didn't think of that. Anyway, why not try other couples other than just Ash and Misty? Why not the character that I hear will be sorta replacing Misty? Only a thought. |
Reviewed By: Christina On: June 27, 2003 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! i read this on ff.net, so now i'm gonna read the sequal. i love it!! |
Reviewed By: Rachiru_Rebonu On: June 20, 2003 23:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
-twitches- -shields eyes- Will not read lemon, will not read lemon......-reads lemon-
lol, very nice liz!
Rae |
Reviewed By: Rachiru_Rebonu On: June 20, 2003 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
-twitches- is this self insertion? Do you actually like Brock *that way*?
Rae
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Reviewed By: Rachiru_Rebonu On: June 20, 2003 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Liz! This is a nice start! I don't usually read Pokemon, but for you i'll make an exception.
Rae |
Reviewed By: yankeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 07:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent Fic. I really liked it. It had a good storyline and everything made sense. Also you had no spelling mistakes. Keep Writing! |
Reviewed By: Jewell On: June 10, 2003 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The enjoyment factor should go up to at least 12 here. 10 isn't enough for this awsome fic!!! I LOOOVE IT!! I wanna find out what happens! pleeeeseee!! Gotta find out! Your writing style and ideas are soooo cool!! |
Reviewed By: YamiNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mwahahahaa! I love this story. But I wrote it, so... um, yeah... |
