"Cool Inspiration" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: XShootingStarX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 13:02 CDT Comment/Review: Wha? that's it? Nooo where's the hot lemony goodness? you can't keep us hanging!!! pls update?
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Reviewed By: Yami_Bakura_Itemri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 00:18 CST Comment/Review: T____T Continueing????
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Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 11:55 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That story was great!! Are you going to update it? There are only two chapters, so i would assume so. Anyway, keep up the good work! And Yami's obession with popcicles was genious! ^_^
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Title: wowee Reviewed By: j_mame-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 14:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that was so good.omg.i wish i was there to see Yami's hot sexy body.but please update soon. this is torture waiting for the other chapter.
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Reviewed By: UchinoBakuratoRyou On: June 07, 2004 15:32 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wai! this is very funny and interesting so far---are ya goin' ta update?
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Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 19:31 CST Comment/Review: Lol, that's awesome. Too bad there wasn't a lemon *cries*
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 20:46 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: X_X Cody's muse- well you knocked her out with Homoerotic bishounen innuendo but it's alright she loved every moment of it. We will definately be back for the final chapter!
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Reviewed By: Silverwing On: July 07, 2003 16:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: PURE GENIUS!!!! I loved it!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA! Yami has a popsicle fetish!! More chapters!!! ^_^ lady_silverwing@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: Protector of love between Yami and Yugi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 13:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Come on and update this story. I want to see what Yami is going to do to Yugi next. I want to see it soon! |
Reviewed By: kobi-chan On: June 25, 2003 14:07 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Kawaii!! this was just too cute.. Yugi is such a tease.. :P |
Reviewed By: Red Queen On: June 17, 2003 14:26 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Ah! I need more! It's fun to see Yami have a weakness for popsicles. Hey Yami! I've got popsicles! Then Yami doing what he did to poor
Yugi! Bad Yami! Bad! But then Yugi getting back
at Yami and giving him his just desserts ;-)
Is Yami going to up the ante?
Is Grandpa going to ever come back with those damn
popsicles and find the two in a compromising position? Or is the store going to be out of
them? Keep it up. I'll be back for Chapter 3.
See ya!
GOT YUGI? GOT YAMI? |
Reviewed By: Mink On: June 16, 2003 20:09 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ye gods! You must finish the story! I love Yami and Yugi fics so you have to finish! |
Reviewed By: Carly On: June 12, 2003 21:52 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: THAT WAS SOOO GOOD! I LIKED IT! LMAO! I LAUGHED SOO MUCH! I LIKED IT! CONTINUE!!! |
Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 09:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Teehee, Yugi is so mean! lol Yami so deserved it though. Teehee! This story is so kawaii!! well update soon please! ^_____^ lemon in next chappie?! kewl!!! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 19:47 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hey---
totally loved this chapter. yugi got his revenge and boy was it sweet!!! your descriptions were very good and i laughed at a lot of things.
the way you write is very developped and thought out. i love the way you speak to the reader and make them feel involved in the character's thoughts and emotions. excellent job!
i can't wait to see what happens since the game has ended yami is frustrated, ne?
keep up the great work and update soon! can't wait to see more!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
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