| "True Intentions" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: GarfieldGurl On: April 14, 2004 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE!!!!!!!ASAP, PLEEEEEASE!!!:)
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cant wait for the next chappy!! UPDATE SOON!! =^-^= W.T.P.
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Reviewed By: Cresent moon 22000 On: October 30, 2003 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOOOOOOON ASAP PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Cresent moon 22000 On: October 29, 2003 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC KEEP IT UP K
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Reviewed By: Ryuumaru On: October 25, 2003 19:47 CDT
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look there is no basis for kagome and sess. in several episodes kagone admits her love for inu and i think sess should marry rin cause he will still look the same when she is like 18 and dont say that is gross cause do ANY of us know how old inu really is?
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Reviewed By: black canary On: August 18, 2003 01:32 CDT
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interesting. can't wait for the next chapter. so please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Shessi_and_Kenshin-chans_Slave_Hinkoi_Mizuno [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 11:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
one word
GAY!!!!!!!!!
well lets just say u have alot to work on! |
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has potental. I think the dialogue needs work. You need to focus on character development. You should not have to add stuff in you author's notes to make it clear. Maybe you should get inspiration from other fanfics. |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: June 21, 2003 18:30 CDT
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I am gonna be as nice as possible...So here goes. Your dialogue needs PLENTY of work. -_- You need to atleast make the chapters longer. You also need to be more descriptive. Yep. Well just keep updating and... Improve. |
Reviewed By: Angelwater8 On: June 09, 2003 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, just wanted to comment for a second. Your story seems pretty good, and it defintely has potential, comedy and romance wise...but as a suggestion maybe you could expand on your dialogue? ^_~; Maybe for your new chapter you could talk about Kagome's next move or even Sesshomru's. Like he could do a whole denial thing (he doesn't love her...just blind passion)and then suddenly have a change of heart about her...or you could make it funny *^_^* Funny is good. Ok, well keep up the good work! And update! |
Reviewed By: MysticalAngel On: June 07, 2003 15:10 CDT
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Update soon and make the chapter longer! |
Reviewed By: Sai-chan On: June 06, 2003 09:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!! u mean evil person!!!!!! update!update!update!update!update!update!!!!!!! |
