| "Onsen Tricks & Treats" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Onsen Tricks & Treats
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!! That was too cute with Momiji at the end!! Almost makes you wonder why he couldn't have arranged it to where Tohru and Kyou share a room. lol. I hope to read more of your stories. So far, so good. lol. ^-^ MORE! Tchao!
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Reviewed By: Neko-chan On: July 15, 2003 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was great! Writing-wise, you had a pair of odd, strung-on sentences near the end (when they both 'came'), but otherwise, it was written very well--very tasteful, and still very erotic! Well done! I just love a good Kyoru! Your score in originality is mainly due to the fact that I've seen the onsen thing done many times before w/Kyoru fics (probably for the same contest ^_^), but other than that, it contained some original & creative elements, such as Momiji's involvement in getting the two together. I really liked that--it was quite cute!
Well, keep up the great work! Power to the few of you good Kyoru writers out there--there just aren't enough! |
Reviewed By: Runic On: June 18, 2003 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That sly little Momiji, I loved how you went back to him at the end. ^^ Neat. |
Reviewed By: Love Witch On: June 07, 2003 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a major Kyou (That hottie) And Tohru FAN! and i'm so glad you made this fic! I love it! HEHE! That damn Yuki. I hope he dies!
Anyway I hope you write more! Please! You so can! |
