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| "Marron Sandwich 2: Yours, Mine, and Ours" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Title: Revolutionary
Reviewed By: Kricket [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 12:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have totally changed my views on all three of them. I'd have to say this is one of the best Dragon Ball Z stories I have ever read in my life. Kudos to you, Kinomi.
| Title: d-d-d-d-d-Daaaaammmmnnnn!!!!!
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Daaaaammmmmnnnn!!! I love this fic! You're a master in writing lemons! whooh! I'm soaking wet down there, I love the Marron Sandwhich trilogy.
I think it's far out the best G/M/T fic written ever!!! Excellent job!
Ok, I'm off now, reading your other fics! ^_^
~Blue Dragon~ | Reviewed By: fusionHA [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've kicked my ass so hard, I won't be able to sit for a week!
This is... wow... incredible.
There's really no other way to put it.
All of my begging, pleading, groveling, bribery, and guilt trips have paid off! lol This is everything I thought it would be, and if I had to write you and tell you here just how far you've exceeded those expectations... well, MediaMiner would be pissed for taking up so much room on their site. ^_^ The characterizations of the three of them (and especially Trunks in my eyes) is so complete, I still have a hard time believing that you didn't plan all of this from the beginning when you wrote that little "G rated" one-shot over a year and a half ago. rofl I try to model my own character development after the effort and work you put into yours, and every time I think I can't make my characters believeable, I read this for inspiration! You think I'm yanking yer chain, but I'm not.
Thanks for writing this. Our of doing so, I not only got to see a sequel to one of my favorite fics, but made a friend out of it, too ^_^
I love ya' K! | Reviewed By: Ashley On: July 29, 2003 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! One word to describe this... DAMN!! Great story as always and wow... I can't get over it. You really did outdo yourself!! Damn...*sigh* this should go in the lemon hall of fame ya know... damn, wow...i can't think of anything else to say that I wanna try what Marron did =)!! Wow girlie... good job, good job, you deserve a gold medel for that one...wowiez, it was amazing, im so serious, keep up the good job!! | Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love it!! And you know this already, but I thought I'd leave a review so everyone else would know too. The characterization is amazing and the writing is outstanding. The lemons (especially the last one ~_^) were so fantastic and so hot that I had to all but take a freezing shower to cool down. lol. But I think I was more swept up in the emotion of it all more than anything. Whether it was lemon or not, my heart was pumping from all the angst. It's just all so great! I can't explain to the right extent how great the plot is, how great the writing is, or how much I enjoyed being there the whole time it was being written. You are one of the most amazing writers I have ever had the pleasure to read from. I aspire to writing like yours. ^^ And I can't wait to read more from you! Keep up the great work!! | Reviewed By: Jeez On: June 17, 2003 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wasn't supposed to review this (I've already reviewed the third part) but I thought "What the heck?"
Actually, I wanted to comment on the second chapter of this fic. I thought it was really amazing, especially the part where Goten and Marron finally make love alone.
It was incredible, the way they shared their energy like that, and it was at this moment when I knew they would be together forever, with or without Trunks.
I don't know, but recently, even before I've read this, I'd become very fond of a G/M pairing. It just fits, y'know? Before all that, I was crazy about T/M, now I'm not so sure. All I know is that I'm definitely not for a T/P paring. It's just wrong. Anyway, I've grown to like Goten. He rocks!! He's so adorably sweet and sooo not the type to just walk away. I can't picture him doing that!! All I can say is Goten and Marron are made for each other.
..And keep up the great work!! | Reviewed By: fusionHA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ha ha, ha ha ha! I know what's coming neeeext! I know what's coming neeeext! LOL
As the self-proclaimed president of the Marron Sandwich Fan Club, I must say that I simply can NOT wait for the last part of this and you know I'll be riding your ass until you finish it! *puts foot down* This fic series is THE REASON I decided to ever write G/T/M stuff... only you're stories have the balls to do what I'm too chicken shit to write myself (but I have gotten better)! lol If it wasn't for the original MS, I'd probably be writing crappy B/V fics, so I am eternally thankful for being shown the light of interesting and creative fanfic writing. ^_~
I love it! I require more! Hurry! I can't jold out much longer!!! Nnnn... | Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 06:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY KINOMI. GLAD YOU UPDDATED THIS ONGOING STORY ABOUT THE THREE. GOTTA SAY YOU'VE REALL OUT DONE YOUR SELF WITH THIS ONE. HOPT YOU FINISH IT SOON.
YOU ARE MY SHE-RO.
PEACE OUT | Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant...ooh this story is just fantastic. I have read the first part and the last of this trilogy, but didn't get off my lazy arse to review. Can't wait to see more of this ficcy. So well written that I am envious....please write more...and soon!! :) |
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