| "Vanilla" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Takara On: January 06, 2004 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm, very short, but I liked it anyways. I would have enjoyed it more if you would have taken your time on the "love making" part. XD It was lacking in detail, so that was a shame. You did catch Yuki's personality very well, however... I'm not so sure about Tatsuha. But anyways, I love incest and I love this pairing. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Cassyndra On: July 29, 2003 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love incest. End of story. But wouldn't it be amusing to do a sequal where, while Tat and Yuki were togeather at Yuki's house, Ryu and Shu got togeather for the same reasons at the hotel room while on tour. It would remain all their little secrets ;P
I don't know if that plot *above* has already been used, but its amusing.
AND I LOVE YOUR LEMON! |
Reviewed By: WilliDrairAngel On: July 25, 2003 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOO-HA!!! ...eh heh...sorry. I'm a total tw/incest fanatic. And a PWP-ish fanatic, for that matter. In other words, I LOVED your fic! Write more like it please (maybe with Ryuichi and Shu-chan joining, as sugested)! n_n |
Reviewed By: Mizuko On: June 21, 2003 00:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm... I can't say that I'm not a fan of incest seeing as Angel Sanctuary's one of my fav's, but I haven't really thought about it in any other series. This was interesting. |
Reviewed By: AngelBakuraIshtar45 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ I love this pairing. I mean, they don't really even seem like brothers so... ::shrugs::
I think you should write another one. A Yuki/Tatsuha lemon...yum. ^_^ Great fic! |
Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definetly...intresting. Although, like stated, not into the incest thing, but, that was well written. And orignal, too. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: hopemia On: June 07, 2003 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not into incest... I agree it would be quite humorous if Shu and Ryu walked in during the middle of them going at it. Can you imagine their faces? O.o + O____o
Ryu would join right in ,but Shu would be so embrassed and Yuki have to get him in the mood!!! |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 09:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know, even when I'm not into incest, I like this little fic of yours, in a way it was kinda funny, but the truth is..knowing both Yuki and Tat...they probably do it especially if Shu and Ryu are not around to please them. LOL
=^.^=
But it would be fun to see Ryu and Shu suddenly appear...mmm maybe even join. Ok that sounded a little bit wrong, but..oh well. :P
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