|
| "Many Thoughts" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: From Ryokoyuy1@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: Ryoko Yuy (offline) On: June 10, 2006 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I'm quite surprised that only one other person has bothered to leave a review of any sort on this fic. I really enjoyed the thought processes of each of the characters and I feel that you were very true to their nature in your writing. The only thing I didn't much care for was the portrayal of Kikyo's thoughts. There was something that irked me, but I can't quite place a finger on it.... Oh well, didn't much matter, you still did a good job. When I get the chance, I'll try to go over some of you other fiction as I came across your link on the 'Pic-a-Fic' thread on the forums. I'll find the time to leave a properly signed review on one of your other fics. I write Inu Yasha fanfiction also, my pride as an author hinges from my Kagome/Sess fic 'Lying From You' R&R if you get the chance ^_~
| Title: Many Thoughts
Reviewed By: Inugome Kayasha On: October 20, 2003 04:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kool I liked your storie. I liked the way you explained Kikyo and Inuyasha feelings toward each other most fan fics I read likes to put it down simple and sometimes confuseing like "Heloved her but now shes gone and he cant love her anymore." or " Shes dead now all my heart belongs to you." Im like ok is that true love? Dont get me wrong I go for Kagome and Inuyasha pairings totaly!(Although I do tend to enjoy Fluffy-Samma and Kagome pairings 2...just as long as Inu and Kag have their moment and no ones hurt ^_^.)Well I g2g my family is freaking out saying Im way into this anime thing especially becuase im a teenage blk female they think Im just suppose to be into well..u know...n e wayz thats another story! I really hope you finnish your fanfic I really enjoyed it! P.S. I feel so sorry for Kouga he never wins over Kagome...but dont worry I luv all of Rumiko Takahashi besides Naraku! *Naraku pops head out of nowere* "Nani Baka?!You shall die!" " Onigumo first....." " Why you little..." " Takanari shawndew!" " Noooo!!!" *Inuyasha,Miroku,Sesshamaru,and Kouga pops out of nowere without shirts on and all ask* " Were did you get that killer move from?!" " Oh that old thing ^_^?" * Starts rubbind on Sess smoth body* I can teach you it if you want me to. * Lookind at Kouga*....lol well g2g Ive talked 2 long la la L8er!
|
|
|
