"Heir of the Orochi" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: reader Reviewed By: ??? On: June 17, 2005 15:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Ranma and Setsuna Meioh @ S.Pluto (SM)together as a pairning
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Title: A Great Fanfiction Reviewed By: Silverscale the emperor of the Silver Dragons On: December 26, 2003 09:06 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story must have been one of the most fantastic I ever read. You made Ranma into the avatar of Orochi with was a genius move. Hope you will continue on the story soon. Oh and for the couple/realationship I would vote for these three. Setsuna=Sailor Pluto(SM) Tsunami=Goddess of Jurai(TM) Belladandy=Goddess of Past(AMG)
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Reviewed By: Adorable Akane On: October 27, 2003 00:13 CST Comment/Review: Argh! I can be such an idiot sometimes! I forgot 2 give u my email address! Sorry! '^,^ silversaori@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Adorable Akane On: October 27, 2003 00:12 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I thought your story was da boom!! Pleas you have to Please Update soon! And Please email me when you do! Put Ranma with Setsuna cause shes way 2 serious and I think she needs somebdy to care for! Don't you agree? It's okay if you don't though, it'll just make your story even more original! Not that it's not original enougth it's just....Argh! Please don't take it the wrong way! People always get mad at me! Don't listen 2 any bad reviewers. Their just jelious cause they can't write great stories like you can! And I mean it! Please email me anytime if you need anything! I'd like to be friends! Ja ne! ~Akane~ P.S. Funny face ne? o.0
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Title: Ooh, MY VOTE! Reviewed By: Ranko-neechan On: October 07, 2003 13:34 CDT Comment/Review: I think that Ranma should end up with either Morrigan from Darkstalkers or Chun-li from Streetfighter, however if I had to choose from the list, I'd say...Sasami or Chibi-Usagi. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dark Topaz [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 22:44 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ihope u update
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Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: July 18, 2003 21:02 CDT Comment/Review: I want to totally bash,etc Nerima Wrecking Crew,Genma,Souan,Nabiki,Amazans,Golden Duos(two two ice skaters that Ranma and Akane beat),Goaski(voodo kid), and all foes that Ranma hates/etc and I want them to suffer horrible fates,etc. |
Reviewed By: Shinji On: June 11, 2003 00:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Kinda interesting. I'm into Sasami or Tomoe pairing. Maybe Black Lady would be a better choice than Chibi Usagi. |
Reviewed By: lexmark On: June 09, 2003 18:27 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: This is an ok fic so far but you should do something
about the short length of the chapters.
I vote ranma ends up with:
04)Usagi Tsukino @ S.Moon (SM)
11)Sasami (TM) |
Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 13:35 CDT Comment/Review: A reasonable start there, but I would not add any more crossover elements as they will mess with the mechanics of the fic.
Adding in aliens and deities would require too much suspension of disbelief. |
Reviewed By: Oni no Kage [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 07:56 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Seems like a good idea, so far. In the relationship idea, I would have to vote for one of these two choices:
02) Hotaru Tomoe @ S.Saturn (SM)
03) Setsuna Meioh @ S.Pluto (SM)
Good luck with this. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Ja ne. |