| "Tale Of A Beautiful Demoness" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: DAMN!
Reviewed By: Kalabash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=( I'm very unhappy right now...first my belly button piercing got infected, then all of my fanfictions aren't updated yet, and you have no more chapters to read!!! *Pouts and growls some* but i like it so far! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kalabash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 03:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WELL HURRY UP THEN! pdaterz VERY soonz! *yawns* holy shit! its 3:00AM! OMG!!! my moms gunna kill me!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaruboi On: July 17, 2003 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is that it? If not then u should write what happens next, I really want to find out. |
Reviewed By: Kurai On: July 05, 2003 02:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
update~ all those fics! and hers too!
i needa read more stuff~ why is everyone suddenly on strike or something? isnt summer meaning they should be free? the why are all those fics in my faves not updating all of a sudden? >____<
WAH I need more updates~!
pweeeeese? |
Reviewed By: Demoness of the Dark [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very interesting plot developing in this story and it is one of the more unique stories that I have had the pleasure to read. Keep writing and update soon. |
Reviewed By: WishDragon On: June 11, 2003 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry and write/post the next chapter and keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Cup Cakes On: June 07, 2003 17:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
The storyline of this fanfiction is very interesting. However, to make it even better, you could add some mystery in your writing style. For example, have more adjectives, detail, and don't state everything. Make your point seen, but not obvious. Get what I am saying? |
