| "When Two Worlds Cross" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: anonymous gal On: July 12, 2004 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
well we can all tell that you completely copied samurai x and im sure this would have been good if you didnt just copy the entire samurai x script like word for word but it was still a good idea cause li fits kenshins role pretty well, its just like the way everything is worded its so much like samurai x that it makes your story seem a little bit tacky!! next time try to make it a bit more of your own ideas!!
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Reviewed By: anonymous gal On: July 12, 2004 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
well we can all tell that you completely copied samurai x and im sure this would have been good if you didnt just copy the entire samurai x script like word for word but it was still a good idea cause li fits kenshins role pretty well, its just like the way everything is worded its so much like samurai x that it makes your story seem a little bit tacky!! next time try to make it a bit more of your own ideas!!
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Reviewed By: sofie/triple s On: December 28, 2003 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good, but i bet you got some of your idea from another anime. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee write more. by the way are you a female or male? weird question huh
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Reviewed By: damon On: July 08, 2003 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY good. so wheres the rest of it? you have to write more its worth the time. |
Reviewed By: kili087 On: June 07, 2003 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. That was defintly different. I say that it is quite a story and that i can't wait to read the next chapter.
:D *Grins like a chesher cat and gives two thumbs up* |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 20:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
You gonna continue soon? CAUSE I WANNA READ MORE! AND SO DOES MY CAT! And it's origional! May Artemis's blessings be witchya!
Allie` |
