| "In My Mixed-Up Life" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: dont end it!!! v.v;
Reviewed By: animeotaku418 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 17:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOO! DONT STOP NOW! you hardly ever find a good wufei story and this ones AWSOME! tell your little plot bunny to start pestering you again cause this cant be over now! it screams to be continued!!! heheheehe well i think you did a really good job with the fic. it was very well written and i can see the characters reacting like that. i dont think wufei would have been more annoyed because i think hes generally an understanding guy, provided you dont go against him.....heheheh well i really hope you write more soon and if you dont then i will tell the aliens to come down and abduct you.........not really... anywho, toodles! ^^
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Reviewed By: Airen On: June 08, 2003 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Wufei would have been a lot more annoyed when Sally said she was going to take the day off and asked him to do so too...but other than that, I really liked this! I really think you should continue it, as well. Could be an interesting series. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Yen On: June 08, 2003 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! I loved it. Sally and Wufei are the ultimate couple and a kid added to it makes for a good plot. I hope there is more? |
