| "Is This Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nazuma Neiko On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry my first review was rigth after Ch. 6.
So i didn`t know about the whole desk thingy!!!
You are evi!!!! if it makes you fell good!!!
*grumbles under breath about baka cliffy loving
ningen that needs to update A.S.A.P* I Hope in
my oppion that you do a lemon between Fluffy and Kagome!!! *grins evily* With very juice details
unlike some other authors I Know that use the authors lemon ace in hole!! DON`T YOU EVEN THINK IT CLIFFY LOVING NINGEN!!!!!!! Update A.S.A.P!!! |
Reviewed By: Nazuma Neiko On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Comment/Review:
EVIL CLIFFY LOVING BOOGER!!!!!!!!
KEEP ON GOING!!!!!
I`m gonna take my imagination to the max and say
that Sesshoumarus`s little helper is a forest or
a tree demon/spirt??! K`SO YOUR GOOD AT THIS KINDA THING!!!! If I Steal the part use NAZUMA OR
NEIKI.STUPID NAME Huh???? |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Riomi is back!! People really thought that you were like the Riomi in your story? Werid.
Anywho, I love Sayaiko's powers as well as her fate. Being able to look after your love ones and repair them. And InuYasha is just being evil!! If the jewel were the only thing he wanted then he could have gotten that by himself. (Coward) But Sesshomaru isn't being any better trapping Kagome in the hot spring like that. They have both been very naughty puppies. And it is neat how you kept Sesshomaru's thoughts in the third person.
Poor Miroku and Shippo nobody is telling them anything. Oh well, my sanity has returned! ( *the crowd cheers* ) And sorry about this being all jumbled up. I write them in paragraphs but they come out like this. (5th time today, honest) If anyone knows how to fix my problem let me know. (and yes I tried the < br > & < P > tags already)
Belooking for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sessy's girl On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it I want ot know what he wants. Although i think that I kno wwhat it is. Anyway keep going please. |
Reviewed By: PhoenixTear7 On: July 30, 2003 18:52 CDT
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Love the plot. I love Inu/Kag fics but they're getting boring. But this gives the story a very interesting kick. You really found a way to spice up a really good story. Just hurry and finish. The people who love this story can't wait forever. Please hurry!!!!!!!! Aaaahhhh! Damn you and your cliff hangers. This story is too good for you to forget about it. |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 22:56 CDT
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Pleaseeee update soon. This is pure agony!
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Reviewed By: animefan On: July 07, 2003 08:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I meant to say that I would like to guess that a Kiyoukai was a forest demon. |
Reviewed By: animefan On: July 06, 2003 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Has a start and a good storyline going. I would like to get also. Is a Kiyoukai a Forest demon? |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 00:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good! Please, I need another update! I haven't seen past Koga kidnapping Kagome but I will try and figure out what demon she is.
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Reviewed By: Weebo On: June 24, 2003 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh - its alright. In your later chapters it gets a little better but I think you should have a beta reader to help you along. It would make the story smoother and they would tell you where you would need to improve it. I'm glad you made the correction of Sesshoumarus name. First is ws Sesshumaru - now its Sesshomaru. But Its Sesshoumaru. I kept thinking that the entire time I was reading. You could also make your chapters a bit longer - like a paprgraph or two. But please take up my advise on the beta reader.
- Weebo.
P.S. If you can't find anyone who wants to do beta reads - I'll do it. Send a chapter to Killerkiwi2@hotmail.com and I'll make grammer changes and advise you where to add more details on or where something does not make sense. Anyway good luck with writing. It was a decent read. |
Reviewed By: Ish On: June 23, 2003 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah the first chapters are so damn evil!! But please do finish the last chapters. :) |
Reviewed By: Fluffysgirl4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DARN YOU FOR YOUR CLIFFYS! Ok, I'm going to take a wild guess at this. A kiyoukia is either a wind or spirit demon. I really don't think I'm right! ^_^ O well, Kaitlin's the name, guesings the game. right? O well. I loved the story, so please update soon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: MDHT1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 11:47 CDT
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That story was good, you are really fuckin evil. |
Reviewed By: Shiki Gami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 02:06 CDT
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Hm ... Pretty good, though I haven't read a lot of Inuyasha fan fics yet. I hope you update soon. The story is getting quite interesting. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Sai-chan On: June 21, 2003 23:48 CDT
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wahahahaha!!! i love it! it's coolies! And my guess for a kiyoukai would be an air or wind youkai ^-^ hope i got it! wouldn't mind bein in the fic too! XD Thanks
Purple |
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