| "Is This Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Reviewed By: Precious On: June 17, 2003 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story considering I am not a big fan of lemons. In addition, the imagery was great. And the plot was decent. I could easily see the characters in their asigned roles. I can't say too much about Riomi but, she seems like a heartless witch. Although that does not mean I don't like her. She is heartless but she did not back down, and I like that. Anyway this is a story worth reading.
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Reviewed By: 4U2NV On: June 17, 2003 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK. Shes now off with Sesshoumaru.*serves Inuyasha right* Whats with this Inuyasha/Riomi and then your screenname is Riomi? Bet I can guess. Anyways I like your fanfic. Keep up the good work. Please Update Soon! |
Reviewed By: Neko-Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have done well, young dragonfly. Write more, please! |
Reviewed By: Neko-Hime On: June 13, 2003 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done well, young dragonfly. I'm really curious as how Inuyasha-kun will handle this situation. He needs to get a grip on his emotions and tell Kagome that he loves her. Otherwise, this is going to be a sad ending for the baka hanyou. Hope to see more of your work soon!
Your fellow fanfic creater and Inuyasha lover,
Neko-Hime ("Sarah") |
Reviewed By: ShiroiHinoTori On: June 12, 2003 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshomaru is the real spelling of his name. and 'demo' means 'but' not 'domo' which is a very casual 'thank you'. Other than those two, I thought everything was good. |
Reviewed By: jp On: June 11, 2003 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it when kagome ditches inu-yasha for fluffy
*laughs wickedly* |
Reviewed By: amanda On: June 11, 2003 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to continue and fast i HATE incompleted fanfics |
Reviewed By: Kangel On: June 09, 2003 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok bad story sorry but inuyasha hurting kagome like that come on i just hopr the whore dies and inuyasha suffers because he still loves kagome because he thought after the jewel is finish she would leave. And make this fic into a Kag/Sess fic |
Reviewed By: Kangel On: June 09, 2003 16:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok bad story sorry but inuyasha hurting kagome like that come on i just hopr the whore dies and inuyasha suffers because he still loves kagome because he thought after the jewel is finish she would leave. And make this fic into a Kag/Sess fic |
Reviewed By: Inu+kag 4E!!! On: June 09, 2003 13:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok i hated this fic so much and i only read tha 2 chapters!! u r evil!! y tha hell would u do that?!?!? i dont like it at all! |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You get a ten for pissing me off first thing in the morning, I can't wait to see what kagome's going to do to pay dog boy back. *rubs hands together* I hope is nice and mean *evil laughter* I have to go be evil to my sims now |
Reviewed By: Rei On: June 08, 2003 20:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thsi story started out really cruel but very interesting. Riomi was a nice touch. Keep on writing. It is starting to get hot and I want to see just how many times Inu-chan will get sit before Kagome has finally let out her frustration. Hehe just a thought. Well it is really good so far so keep going. |
Reviewed By: Brittanica (not really) On: June 08, 2003 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that this was really uniqe. Putting in your own characters gives these types of stories something... extra. I hope the author will continue. |
Reviewed By: whit On: July 15, 2003 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you have to finish this story so i can finish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it and cant wait till what happens next inyuasha and sess and kagome!!!!!!!!!! HEHEHEHEHE |
Reviewed By: Riomi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For you readers out there i'm so sorry for not posting in a while its just that my computer at home has broken down so u all have to wait til i get a new one i have still written other chapters to the story so when i get my stuff fixed it will go on right away. Thanx for sticking with me reviewers.
Riomi |
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