Reviewed By: Mahayana On: June 08, 2003 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just have to say...wow. This is _exactly_ how I picture Ryou and Bakura's relationship, and I'm so impressed that you managed to capture it so well! *applauds*
Favourite moment of Zen:
"/We are two separate people! So why is it that when I look in the mirror, I only see you?/"
That entire sceen was just...so very....amazing...
True, your writing style could use a little polishing and there are some scenes that could use some fixing, like when Ryou's talking to Yami Yuugi and Yugi in the bathroom and the opening (I thought they were a little cheesy)... but the story overall is just amazing ^__^ I love your concept and the title itself fits it very well!
I commend you for your excelent fic ^_~ |
