| "Addictions" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: White Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. It contains of my favorite couples: Trunks/Gohan.
I can imgaine everthing that happened in the story. It almost seemed real. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: leelee On: July 21, 2003 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...damn, Trunks is a real ass. My Kami, I knew that he was dvious but...damn...convincing Videl to kill her innocent little baby? I don't care too much for Videl or Pan, but geez. *shakes head at Trunks* Anyway, Trunks is pretty much as kinky as Gohan is. And Gohan being the perv he is, I was very surprised. Lol, I like this game they have going on between them. It's interesting. A very VERY good read. I like this fic a lot! You must update it very soon!! |
Reviewed By: Zani [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was damn good |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
rflmao!
you give Trunks the best lines! man...and footplay under the table...jeeez. the stuff dreams are made of!
i am so into this fic!! |
Reviewed By: MarronBriefs [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was looking for something different and I find it. I love this fic but I'm not into yaoi but I will read one. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 10:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Poor trunks. :( I almost feel sorry for Goten too. he's completely oblivious. |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 02:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read it about three times. oh. my. god.
i love this fic. the beginning with Trunks on coke...then that flashback....jeeeez. the way you write the characters- with their psyches on their sleeves- is incredible.
the way you write trunks is fantastic. just right on the money:
“You're too slow, Trunks!”
“Damn it, slow down, then!”
“Trunks! Don't say those things! They're bad!”
“Fuck off, Goten!”
you write them all so well...gohan was such a jerk! wow. _deep breath_ i am so green. i wish i wrote this. gaaa! |
Reviewed By: Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 05:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Most writers can't do A/U worth a damn, but this is believable enough for me. Good job. |
