| "The Dusty Trail" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: TT On: June 15, 2005 10:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Add to favourite, please write more! wats wrng with vegetas blood?
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Reviewed By: blueminx On: November 09, 2003 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
moremoremoremoremoremore-----MORE!!!!!!!!!! I like it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cerulean Rhapsody [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, I love this! You've done a perfect job in keeping Bulma and Vejita in character. I hope to see an update soon! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: July 18, 2003 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(cont.) much that I'm willing to wait for the next chapter. This could take a while. I'll probaby out of college when this story is done. That's 6 years. Seems like adequate time to me? Nice work, just please promise me you'll by a muse and get some inspiration before October? |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: July 18, 2003 01:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
sluggy must also stand for "sluggish." I can't say you didn't warn me and I love this story SO |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love tis fic! I've never heard of theis concept before. Very Original. Please update faster tha normal!! |
Reviewed By: Goat On: July 16, 2003 00:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think there are no differences so far |
Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far! Please write another chapter soon. ANd maybe you could read one of mine ^_^ WEll I hope u update soon cuz i have enjoyed reading this and i want to know what happens next. bye!
=Sb |
Reviewed By: Evil Saint On: June 16, 2003 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved reading Ch1. Its so rare to find a truly captivating B/V fic these days and this really is one of those rare gems! Great work! I can't wait to see what happens. I love the way Vegeta is depicted by the way, not to mention Bulma's mom ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Evil Saint [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Gr8 job you did with this one. Keep up the good work ^_~ |
Reviewed By: SSB On: June 10, 2003 21:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a good start, but there's one glaring ommission that is driving me nuts. Where are the hundred Nameks that should be hanging around Capsule Corporation? |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: June 10, 2003 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't understand why I'm the first person to review this story after 24 visits. I know they know this is absolutely great! People these days, matter o' fact, all days! Any ways you got a perfect 10+ across the board for your story, and if you can't figure out what that means, I'm not gonna tell you. Love your story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
P.S. you need to make an updating list and put me on it. renegetingcrafty@aol.com |
