| "An Unhappy House" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: hmmm
Reviewed By: veronica On: December 08, 2004 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this fiction and do you have an account with fanfiction.net cause ive seen and read this story there before.
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff sniff* that was so so i do not no but it was great! i loved it! and they lived happily ever after! it was wonderul! much love much much love!
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Reviewed By: raven39 On: June 14, 2003 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very creative. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 06:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read this on ff.net, where it wasn't marked as a Sess / Kag, and of course I wondered which character was which -- which I figured was the point.
I figured it could have been Kagome and Inuyasha, Kagome and Sesshoumaru, older-Rin and Sesshoumaru, and then I read that the woman was a youkai.
After that, I thought she was Ayame -- especially with the mention of a quasi-childhood infatuation with Kouga. I guess I'm just not sure why Kagome is in this place in this piece.
Would Sesshoumaru be this angry and posessive? We don't really see what causes this change in him. Why is Sess less than cold when it comes to his wife's attention -- since he doesn't seem to much doubt her actual fidelity. |
