| "Prisoner, My Prisoner" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 11:20 CDT
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i love the story, but i would repost chapter 15 if i were u cause its a bitch to read...but anyways i love it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 15 is hard to read. The rest of the story was great. If it is not finished update soon.
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 12:17 CDT
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Chapter 15 is screwy, the html formatting is showing. Very creative, I enjoyed reading it.
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Title: Lady Raven
Reviewed By: Lady Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
origanal,but some what stale. i liked it. always kept you guesssing.
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Title: Interesting story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 12:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Interested in seeing what happens next. If Kagome stays with Sesshomaru or not.
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwe, i hope kagome and sess finally tell each other their feelings. hey wow! naraku really does have a heart! i wonder who stole the seal. will that have very much relevance/prominance in the upcoming chapter(s)?
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think sesshy-chan is getting attached
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Reviewed By: RED DAY On: August 24, 2003 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I have read every chapter, but now it just seems that your're wanting to end the story, you forgot all about the romance you began with. Its like Sess has done such a turn around that he doesn't still have the same attitude towards Kagome. First, it seems he wanted her so bad whether it was lust or love(which I doubt at this point, NOW). I mean I can't figure out what's happening here. And at one point it almost looked like Sango an Sess had something going on???? I mean Kagome is really sad in this story and Sess either needs to SH-T or get off the pot. Either marry them or send her away. |
Reviewed By: mandi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 05:24 CDT
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COOL!!!I really like this fic, very nice. I can't wait for more chappies!!hmm I know I had a question to ask you..but I can't remember it right now....anywho on the off side, I was just wondering if you were thinking of adding a lemon? Well I will wait for the next chapter, and try to think of my question!! Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaruboi On: July 20, 2003 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is that it? If not then please hurry and continue the story. |
Reviewed By: angelofsess On: June 17, 2003 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have always loved kag/sess pairings. This one was really great (so far). I am enjoying thuis fic enourmously! Keep up the good work you are a really talented writter and i just cant wait for your next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: bsasami153 On: June 10, 2003 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are several stories in this website that are well written like this one. Excellent. Keep up the good work and updates. |
Reviewed By: Sakura Sora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps and wipes a tear from eye* this story is very moving and, I can't just seem tp put it into words at how it makes me feel. the story line just seemingly pulls you in and the character development is excellent. keep writing!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: kokonutsu On: June 10, 2003 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfecto!!! I just love your works, your plots the character development, everything. I can't explain how i feel when i read this story or the other stories that you have here, but its like looking into a whole new world. You are undoubtly one of the best writers out there, mixing the character's interactions with their own thoughts. Kagome seems to react very much like a person would who is held captive, and Rin an innocent who has befriended her, i do agree that the relationship is quite nice however strange that it would happen. I however do not find Kikyou's actions wrong or unjust, she had wanted to save her sister from 'pain and humiliation' by the enemy. Could it be that she could only love her sister to the extent of freeing her through death? And Sesshomaru seems like a whole different person entirely, not doubting his feelings and thoughts for the girl as he would in other stories, he is confident about the way he feels for her although veiwing her as nothing more than his property. Again bravo for your excellant work, i hope that u will continue and write more soon because i am enchanted. |
