| "Being Mature Is Not Easy" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: tntfriday13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 12:32 CDT
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that pairing is so rare! I'm glad you made shippo an adult, this story was original and very good!!
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Reviewed By: PhoenixAngel2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 20:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good fic only there was no chapter 3 but you did have two chapter 4's you might want to fix that. keep up the good work.
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Title: HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!
Reviewed By: Desire69all4u [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 00:09 CST
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HI*cuup!! I am sooooooooooooo wasted and just, wanted...too say *HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ***XD!
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Title: Fluffys mate
Reviewed By: Fluffys mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 17:11 CST
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Ugh, *shudder* i dunno wat to say...good writing, but i'm not so fond of the content....
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Reviewed By: Kiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. I don't usualy read yaoi fics, but I gave it a try. Your fic is great! |
Reviewed By: Amazon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright. Very good. Only name probs. first- its Kirara not Kilala. Second- Its Sesshomaru not Sessho. I recomend a beta who watches Inuyasha in subtitles to help out with spelling and stuff. *thumbs up* but other than that... KEEP WRITING! |
Reviewed By: Sage Of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Keep going! OOO! Keep going! I love it so far. So cute. Keep it up. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Jeff1 On: June 16, 2003 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very intresting fic i cant wait to see what u put the group or more espicaly shipo and miroku in for next. |
Reviewed By: celestial_x On: June 11, 2003 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm, well, im not sure where to begin on this one... ok, number one: i find it a little odd that it would be shippou (who, up until a very short while ago, is a child) taking the initiative as far as the yaoi is concerned. i mean, things are moving pretty quickly. keep in mind that shippou's psyche at this point is still that of a little kid...the dreams seemed weird in that regard but i guess that would be excused by the fact that they are dreams... lets see, number two: when the actual miroku/shippou starts up, maybe the scenes should be a little longer and more emotional than the stuff in the dreams.
on a random note, i suggest you look up the fic "the big mix-up" by Sinnamonkat on mediaminer. its just a good sex-filled fic. your lemons could use a little, i dunno, spicing up.
overall, its a somewhat original plot (seen the whole grown up shippou thing, but never with yaoi!) but i think you could add more descriptions/words to your text. im curious to see where this goes...maybe it will surpass some of the other run of the mill yaoi out there someday. |
Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is great. You shouldn't listen to someone who desn't even capitalize*cough celestial_x cough*. |
