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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 03:22 CST
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Aaaaaahh no Sesshy what is going to happent ko Sesshy was his consious mind devoured by the force that held Inu and Tushio back....And what is with this weird land he has found him self in, when I read it I think of a Nightmarish world that at first glance looks beautiful but then when you actrully pay attention and focas nothing is right, every things is like a goblen or somthing that just wants to torture unsuspecting civilans or something.......I nearly cried when Sesshy found Rin in the spirit world it just the fact that she was happy, happy to see him like she was still with him even though she was gone....I hope all will be safe in the end as your updates will come soon...No?
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Title: Sakura
Reviewed By: baby_kistune23 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT!!! Don't stop posting PLEASE!! This is an awesome story and I only just found it!
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Reviewed By: evileyes On: August 23, 2004 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best Inuyasha stories I have ever read!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sessgirl (not signed in) On: August 13, 2004 18:08 CDT
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Great chapter!!!!!! I think it'll be fun to let Sess think he lost his title...for awhile. BUT, now how are you going to make my Fluffy better sooner???? I can't wait too long for his soul to regrow!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mama-sama On: August 07, 2004 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh...like i beleive you about the twist..... i know how you think! and you know what i like it so there better be more soon!!!
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 12:51 CDT
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oooooh! burn!! lol that was pretty funny "wouldnt measure up" anyways, good story! please continue with it, its very funny :D
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Reviewed By: snowecat On: July 26, 2004 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderful, but you're still spelling NARAKU wrong. I've laughed all the way through this, though I was sad Rin was killed. Wonder if Fluffy will ever meet her reincarnation, and what happens if he does? Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: mamasama On: July 25, 2004 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent chapter!! will be expecting the next chapter soon.... don't want wait till you graduate from college to see the end .... lol!
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Reviewed By: Sessgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about all the fluff...sometimes it's just needed. Great chapter. And I was wondering when it would be brought up that Sess wouldn't be Lord of the West once Taisho was brought back. That popped into my head whenever I first read that Taisho would be coming back with Inu Yasha. I think Sess would be pissed off that he lost all the power he has grown used to; but will he stand up to his father for the throne????
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Reviewed By: mamasama On: July 22, 2004 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that was great chapter!! can't wait for the next installment!!
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Reviewed By: Sessgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 14:52 CDT
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Reviewed By: Sessgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading this story. I think Inu Yasha's father is really funny! But the "Naruke" instead of "Naraku" is kind of annoying. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: mama-sama On: May 31, 2004 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good and getting better ! more soon
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Reviewed By: mamasama On: April 27, 2004 21:53 CDT
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i should sign in but i don't want to so you know who it is by either name any way good chapter and i can't wait to see what happens next!! more soon!!
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Reviewed By: Nokomarie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 10:30 CDT
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Glad you updated. Sort of sad chapter in its way. Definitly building up into a complicated story.
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