| "The Duty Of Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: mamasama On: April 11, 2004 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent and it's good to see you writing again! more soon!
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Reviewed By: Tahiri On: April 11, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay you really have to check your spelling but your story is really interesting and you should try to open up the twins personalities a bit more. keep writing i want to see what happens
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Reviewed By: Q On: March 14, 2004 17:47 CST
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keep up the good work this is one of the stories i look farward to reading sorry more people haven't reveiwed i'm sure its most who read this story like it but plaese don't move this story it is a pain in the butt to keep track of all the stories i am watching althoght it is probly a good idea to post a copy of this story on ffnet.
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Reviewed By: Nokomarie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.K., o.k., here's a review for Pete's sake! Actually, I've never seen this story before and find it as funny as all get out (in a sadiatic way of course). Please continue and I will read. Depends on what you want to do with the lemon as to whether or not it will fly on ffnet . Basically it's no rape of any sort, no unusual orifices, and watch your partner. No inch-by-inch account either although the ones written by the inexperianced can be hysterical: Extra arm, extra vertebrae, the apparent ability to levitate during the act...
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 21:08 CST
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omg... Inuyasha got spanked by his dad!!!! OMG!!!!! Btw... It's "Naraku" not "Naruke"... please get it right... it's fun to make fun of him for it, but still... it's aggravating
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Reviewed By: mamasama On: February 24, 2004 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well heck if i had know it was here i would have read and reviewed it a long time ago, but that's ok i can find you on ffn anyway heh.... ^___* i think you know who this is **grins** later gator!
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Reviewed By: gladys On: February 24, 2004 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't stop writing this story, I like it and want to know what happens. One minor correction, I think it is spelled Naraku, not Naruke. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Q On: November 16, 2003 11:21 CST
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good work i will be watching for your next chap.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like ur story a lot! It's pretty funny too, InuYasha getting spanked by his old man! That was also kinda weird though...Anyway, I REALLY wanna know what happens next, u had better update soon! |
Reviewed By: Sorrow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 07:35 CDT
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Hehe his dad is fucnny you need to write more |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haunting...
Be careful, though. It's too easy to give the two of them so many kids that they don't get characters of their own. |
Reviewed By: lily On: June 10, 2003 21:24 CDT
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wow i hope you update soon. |
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