| "Tsukino No Hikari" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Title: Me Likes it!
Reviewed By: Noizchild [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2009 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know why, but I seemed to have developed a taste for Omi-torture fics. It's a pity it's not finished. You need to get back up and finish this up! I mean it! I command you to finish this fic! You have to, damn it! You have it! *Calms down* Anyway, please, please, please! Finish this fic. You seem to have a little trouble with the grammer. Give it to me, I can fix it up for, ya! But seriously, please finish the fic!
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Reviewed By: Rosekikilola [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 04:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!! Please? *puppyeyed pout* I have to find out what happens next!!! Will omi and ken be ok? (mostley worried about Omi) PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!................. .......i don't know what the or else would be so don't ask and just update!!!! anyway i love this fic u r a very talented writer and i'm anxiously awaiting the next update!! keep up the great writing!
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Title: Update? Pwease?
Reviewed By: Nekosune On: August 05, 2005 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Awsome! Cookies and pocky for you! And yamyams if you update! So please update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 16:45 CST
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OMG u evil evil person *crys loudly* u hurt omi *stops cryin suddenly and grins evily* but i love it u made brad too evil i think but its ur fic hope u write more i love it and yes i am evil very evil ty 4 noticin *grin widens* update or ill come and find u and hurt u badly byebye remember i know all *ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh* *plays scary sound effect cd and laughs evily*
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Reviewed By: Shadow18(not logged on) On: February 03, 2005 16:40 CST
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The 2 was a mistake, my bad. But still update!!!!! I'm gonna die over here!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow18(not logged on) On: February 03, 2005 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great fic...But I hate cliff hangers, I can never seem to read a fic that doesn't stop in the middle of something. ...Why is that its so much fun to torture Omi*thinks* BUT I LOVE HIM SO MUCH, HE'S MY FAV! Well anyway, please, update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 02:19 CST
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*whines and paws at author* but..but...there must be more *pouts then turns evil and atacks Crawford* Evil brad..*whacks him with my Mystical Magical Enchanted Cast Iron Frying Pan of DoOOOOM(tm)*
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Reviewed By: Precognition74 On: March 20, 2004 02:58 CST
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Well, i just came back to this fic, after like what? how many months, it's still as great as ever! and poor Omi... btw, your rape scene have become rather redundant... perhaps add a little bit of spice to spice hings up? ( k, now i sound evil)
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Reviewed By: Isawa17 On: March 10, 2004 21:07 CST
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USAGI! YOU EVIL EVEIL.....THING! You better update soon! Or I shall haunt you with evil clifhaners of my own!!!....wait...dont' I do that already? hehehe. ^-^ any way, I like what is happening! EVIL OMI TORTURE! Ja ne! *huggles*
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Reviewed By: Nagi_chan On: November 25, 2003 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story...I want to know how it ends...Hurry and update ^_^
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Reviewed By: Suzaku3 On: September 15, 2003 18:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhhhhh poor Omi. I hate cliffhangers. You need to write more soon. It's kind of odd that Scuh is going to help but oh well. Please write more soon. |
Reviewed By: ReddAlice On: July 30, 2003 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reasons for rating? Anoo... there where quite a few rough transitions and such, grammar errors, and inconsistancies... but beyond that it was a good solid story. I was a little icked by the Ran/Omi/Ken but hey, it's all good. My favorite pairing is Ran and Omi, and Ken just rubs me wrong. lol.
I loved ur story enough to track it to Mm. So Feel love! lol! Keep posting. |
Reviewed By: Amethyst On: July 22, 2003 12:41 CDT
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Cool story... Please write more... |
Reviewed By: Hitomi On: July 19, 2003 21:08 CDT
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Poor Omi. You are a very convincing writer. I just hope this ends well for poor Omi. |
Reviewed By: Seijyu On: July 17, 2003 08:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Auuuuuf! 'Another -cliff-hanger-!!
Mieh, I hate you...BUT I LOVE YOU! Oh! I can't deny that...that...too great factor of life! I mean it.
Well, another great chapter. I...personally...haven't read-well to put it- LOTS of Weiss fanfics but your Shwarz character personalities seem to me very unique and likable...(I mean Schuldig and Nagi. NOT Crawford)! Ehem.
And, don't worry about the updates, it didn't take long, trust me. I'm glad to hear that this fic is on it's tracks to finishing/climax. I'm dearly looking forward to it. Great work! I'll keep reading, so please keep writing~~ |
Reviewed By: Evee On: July 12, 2003 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!! well.. am loving it... i hope to read the rest soon!!
plzplzplz finish this fanfic!! ish very good... its twists and turns surprise me!^^;;
ja ne!!!
bai
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Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 14:53 CDT
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This is a great fic! Poor Omi!! *cries* He's to kawaii to be treated like that!! T_T well, the story is still great, please continue!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Seijyu On: July 05, 2003 07:04 CDT
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Oh, write more! Please?
Hello, I just thought I might comment on the loveliness and everything, and to bug you to write more! Hope Omi-kun won't die~if he does (rage rage) well, we'll just have to see about that ^_^
Have a relaxable break, and rest and all that!
(Sorry I didn't rate. I'm not that fond of that sort of thing @~@) |
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