| "On Edge" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good. write more. omi tourtur is good but this is evil. have them save omi or have some one find out. u could have one of schwartz find out. idk ur fic. plzz write more i liked it a lot. i will cry if i do not get more.
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Reviewed By: Innocent_Assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 01:20 CST
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eeee~! You haven't updated yet?? Onegai! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sio-chan On: June 16, 2004 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not quite, but almost there, you need to work on a few things, like your spelling and grammer, there were a few times you put the wrong type of word in place. like buy for example, as in goodbye, should be bye, there are 3 differint spellings, and each one means something differint Japanese is kinda the same way, u change the pitch on certon words, u change the meaning. where here, u change the spelling u change the meaning. Hope that helps, my spelling and grammer suck too, that why i have someone check my stuff before i put it up, i sugjest u do the same.
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Reviewed By: inoccent_asassin On: March 13, 2004 09:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this story`s cool! you HAVE to update it! please!
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Reviewed By: neji On: February 05, 2004 12:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!!! WAY TO GO OMI-TORTURE!!! just keep up the good work, can' wait for the ran x omi stuff!!! **why even bother putting that rating ?! that was great ANYWAY!!!**
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Reviewed By: Kionala [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 12:22 CST
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oooh a rivel gang! WeiB and schwarz hehe
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Reviewed By: Snowshoe koneko On: July 25, 2003 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Bombay kitten showed me this on ff.net! I really like it, but was hoping it would be farther along here... oh well! Please hurry though, I've had to deal with a hyper active koneko, since we haven't gotten any more chappies... I love your story! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Suzaku On: June 19, 2003 14:53 CDT
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Hey, I think you did good for your frist Weiss fic. Poor Omi. Everyone picks on him. But I shouldn't be talking because I do the same thing. Please write more soon. |
Reviewed By: fanny On: June 16, 2003 17:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is great!!! keep writting |
Reviewed By: MissyIrene On: June 11, 2003 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far it is a great fic. Keep writing I can't wait to read more. Poor Omi. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Kearoru On: June 11, 2003 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this a whole lot!
Please hurry with the next chapter.
as for schwarz. . uhh, maybe they could. . uhh. . live in Omi's neighborhood? lol, I'm sure you'll work everything out |
