| "Finally Together" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Finally Together
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 13:53 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Finally Together
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 20:20 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: NaTasha Swann On: November 29, 2004 14:53 CST
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I like this fic, but it needs more of a beginning.
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Reviewed By: Stacy On: May 29, 2004 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like I have said in the past im not one who is too big on lemon but this was pritty good i just wish it had more of a story. keep writin though.
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Reviewed By: Srevan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 03:49 CST
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Waaa, that's better than ~I~ could do, congratulations. Maybe if I ever need a lemon scene, I'll ask for help? Nah... only if it's okay with you. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 13:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yup this is one for the memory books. splendid indeed. after that i needed a cold shower. also like faye273 said what happened in the beginning?
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Title: VERY Good Lemon!
Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 03:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Needs more beginning info (you know, hows and whys) and more end info (what will tomorrow bring)to be a 10. But as for the lemony goodness... A+... excelent! Tons of power, lust, and passion in your words. I adored every second!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 14:44 CST
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awww
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Reviewed By: Esca Morae [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 20:25 CST
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ohhhhh i liked that one! youre pretty good for an italian! i commend you. i wish i could write lemons like yours...::day dreams:: wedding night would be cool!!
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Reviewed By: Hellkeeper On: October 13, 2003 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U seemed 2 enjoy that 2 much.That was kind of...in other words DAMN.
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Reviewed By: Dark cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 07:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story write some more please |
Reviewed By: sex princess On: June 12, 2003 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very good lemon. i think u should rite a whole lot more. =) |
Reviewed By: bsasami153 On: June 12, 2003 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sure write the wedding scene. Enjoyed reading your story. |
Reviewed By: Bob On: June 12, 2003 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good! Can I ask you one thing tho? How old are you? if you want to answer me email me at RockysideofMT@aol.com, ohh and I would love for you to write the wedding one too! |
