"Heart and Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Skycat On: November 26, 2003 17:16 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: OH! I love this! This is cool! I really hope you update soon because you got some great ideas running here!
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Reviewed By: purkle dragon goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 16:41 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Love this story so far! Very original plot bunny you've got going here, please continue.
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Reviewed By: KRP On: September 27, 2003 12:18 CDT Comment/Review: WAI!! This is SO COOL! There...there...ARE NO WORDS! Totally original! Inspired and incredible! Interesting and Ingaging! WAI!! I REAALLY LIKE THIS! Ple~ase continue soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: riskygamble [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 23:20 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I first read this story at madamhydra.net, and I greatly enjoyed it. I'm looking forward to more chapters. Pleeeeeeease! |
Reviewed By: Lachesis On: June 11, 2003 18:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: As usual for you, absolutely captivating. Stylistically, not amazingly eye-catching, but the premise and characterization more than make up for it. There are a few minor typos scattered throughout, but these are roughs, so no big deal. The character interaction is excellent, and the definite highlight of the fic.
Like Conflicts of Interest, one of the things I enjoyed most about this was the depiction of mental goings on. Alternately insightful, adorable and creepy. Overall, an enjoyable, suspenseful read. Luv your writing in general. Update soon! |