| "If only for one moment, I could be like you..." Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
Reviewed By: kokosada [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 13:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heeeeeeeellllllllloooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kokosada [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 09:18 CDT
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*pout* Soooo? Now what happens??
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Reviewed By: kokosada [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 13:37 CDT
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Write more. *cracks whip*
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Miroki Rayonna Sekkio [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I heard of ya from Ryou-Bakura1 so I decided to hunt down your fics too...and you're just as talented...but update! I noticed the last time you updated this one was in July!!! NOOO!!! Don't torture me like that! Must find updates!
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Reviewed By: syntheticsylk On: November 24, 2003 03:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done! One of the most original AU fics I've come across in all the fandoms. Love your style, wonderful job executing the plot (when will Marik make his move I wonder) and excellent job with the descriptions. Write more, I'm hooked. And Happy Birthday!
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Reviewed By: al On: October 21, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
happy late birthday. you have to finish this fanfic. it sooo adorable.
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Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 09:00 CDT
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*giggles* It's such a cute lil ficcy!! Can't wait for more!! *claps happily and goes back to singing one of the songs from The Little Mermaid*
~KK =^.^= |
Reviewed By: dragoneyes On: June 18, 2003 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I really am enjoying reading this. What an interesting twist to the typical mermaid stories. I loved the part about Ryou being aressted! I cant wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Rowan On: June 18, 2003 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gave a "9" for Style of writing only cuz of the different color paragraphs, which can get a bit annoying, but other than that, this fic is so cute! Reminds me of "Little Mermaid". Poor Ryou, not on land for more than a couple hours and he gets arrested! Good thing the cops nice! Wonderin' though: how was your friend naked in public w/out noticing? Also, isn't mating when two organisms of the same species and opposite sex get together and reproduce? So how do the merpeople reproduce if practically everyone in this story is male and mating? Do I even want to know? Actually, no, don't answer that! I don't want to know! |
Reviewed By: Rowan On: June 18, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi M-chan! It's me, Rowan, author of "Secrets of Life" @FF.net. It's down, so I'm here reading this fic! It's cute! Reminds me of "Little Mermaid". Poor Ryou, not on land for more than a couple hours and he gets arrested! Good thing the cops nice! Wonderin' though: how was your friend naked in public w/out noticing? Also, isn't mating when two organisms of the same species and opposite sex get together and reproduce? So how do the merpeople reproduce if practically everyone in this story is male and mating? Do I even want to know? Actually, no, don't answer that! I don't want to know! |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 21:21 CDT
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That was really good!! I can't wait until the next chapter!! Please update again soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Oni On: June 15, 2003 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good so far! Please continue Mally-san! |
Reviewed By: Tammy On: June 14, 2003 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well....Ryou can walk now! Yippee! Keep writing 'cause I wanna find out what kind of trouble Ryou gets into. This should be amusing. And well written as always. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Tammy On: June 12, 2003 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story so much! keep writing, i want to read what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Tammy On: June 12, 2003 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that was unexpected. i hope ryou will be ok. keep up the good work! i can't wait to read the rest of this story! |
Reviewed By: Tammy On: June 12, 2003 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well this is a lot softer than most of the things you write. It's good though and i think that it will be interesting to find out how mermaids well....yea. And i've been told that you should write a story about the man beast. Just joking! but yea keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Balis On: June 11, 2003 22:27 CDT
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::sniffles:: I'm the only one here. Sadden. It's really good, I always like reading these stories b/c they're so different. Plus mermaids are fun! ^_^ I hope you continue! I wanna know what's gonna happen next! |
