| "The Birth of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Sakura33 On: August 05, 2005 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey what happened to chapters 21-34? anyways i think it's really awesome and i would love to read more! Pretty Pleease! *Big puppy dog eyes* Ja ne! ~Sakura33
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Reviewed By: kirby16 On: September 19, 2004 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this story when are you going to update I can't wait to see what happens next. Again great story!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashaluver29 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story, I thought that it was so cute, how Inuyasha found Kagome, and raised her from a baby to young lady. Your story gets thumbs up! Please continue it.
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Title: cant live
Reviewed By: K005 On: November 28, 2003 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON OR I WILL DIE I CANT LIVE I CANT BREATH HELP IM DIEING DIEING DIEING AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH:TAKES A BREATH::AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH
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Reviewed By: fangurl On: August 11, 2003 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR FIC IS GREAT! PLEASE CONTINUE I WANT TO SEE WAT HAPPENS NEXT. |
Reviewed By: anubaka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 06:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like this fic but i dont understand whats happinen w/ the chapter numbers and some of the chaps are missing, and some are repeated. |
Reviewed By: RC On: July 01, 2003 05:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one of my most fav storys. But there seems to be chapters missing on the site i read off of. And some chapters are the same as the others even though the plot is great no it isn't great it is better then great but anyway I think something went wrong when you uploaded to the site. |
Reviewed By: nick On: June 14, 2003 20:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
i want to write one how do i e-mail me at minion514@aol.com |
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ano...^__^;;
For what I understood in your story, this is really kawaii and interesting, but I think your posts are all mixed up!!(The chapters 3,5,8 are the same as the previous one or are missing!!)
@___@;; And Why do you jump from chapter 18 to 20 then 35??!!!
Do you have a site or another place where we can find the complete fanfiction with ALL the parts??
If not please try to fix it !!Because apart from this, I really enjoyed reading this story it's really CUTE!!^___^
I will be checking your fiction for more!!^.^
Gambatte ,ne?! |
Reviewed By: kili087 On: June 14, 2003 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really starting to dislike you, I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!! *nerves twiching* I love this story and I would give it a higher rating but it would seem that they only let you go to 10.\
any ways Please Please update soon *big puppy dog eyes* (no pun intended) |
