| "The Love of Good & Evil" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Inuyasha lover
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 17:47 CST
Comment/Review:
*barphing uncotrolabley* WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU YOU SICK TWISTED PERSON. YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER BUT TO MAKE YOUR STORY BETTER,DON'T MAKE ANY CHARACTERS GAY OR LEZES. OH GOD *STARTS THROWING UP AGAIN* WHAT IS WITH GAY STORY'S.*TRANSFORMS INTO GIANT BLACK DOG WITH BLOOD RED EYES AND MARKINGS* DIEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: shao On: June 14, 2003 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. i luv it. its was... facinating, really. And i was amazed it was your first, you seemed experienced. you should do more stories!! good luck! |
Reviewed By: eeh On: June 13, 2003 02:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
dood. that was some weird shit. if your gonna make it do it, do it passionatly. lots of kisses ^_^ |
Reviewed By: GoD_Fiction On: June 12, 2003 23:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
how can you make it better? quit useing the names so much. use pronouns every now and then ya know? but i must say it's pretty good for a first. |
Reviewed By: Sorrow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 22:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked this story caues I like Inuyasha and Naraku storys hehe |
Reviewed By: b On: June 12, 2003 20:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
BAD EDDIE BAD BAD BAD!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sorrow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 13:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heheh I liked that I like Inuyasha and Naraku storys dont know why but thoes are my fave hehe |
