| "Soccer 2" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: goodness gracious great balls of fire
Reviewed By: chloe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 11:46 CST
Comment/Review:
you know what you are cool
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Reviewed By: juggalo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 10:33 CST
Comment/Review:
izes likeses dis. but you should watch out cause you say weird things alot. like this part of it "TAI shot MY load" but hoo iz i to say sumwun weird cause i won the '99 '00 '01 '02 '03 '04 and '05 freak award. eye muh 1un@t1c. goooood fiiiiccy. -projectile vomits- uhh sorry. XP
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Title: _Andromeda_
Reviewed By: _Andromeda_ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great fic, the ending was excellent. ^____^
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Reviewed By: The Hentai freaks On: June 14, 2003 08:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great fic though please write one on Takuya he is so adorable I could watch him all night on my computer same as kindani though more sex less plot
and your next to win a raiding party with the
The Hentai freaks SeE u LAtEr |
Reviewed By: Kindani On: June 14, 2003 08:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great fic though please write one on Takuya he is so adorable I could watch him all night on my computer. |
Reviewed By: Kae On: June 13, 2003 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The stuff at the begaining was confusing. But the paragraghs at the end were good. ^_^ REally cool! I think this ones better then the other. |
Reviewed By: kojiboshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 05:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm happy you write a new PWP, I like Yamachi PWP ^^;;;
What I want to say in my last review is that in "Soccer" some letters are changed in O, but perhaps it was just cause of my navigator. What the problem was, there is no problem in this chapter so it's really esaier to read ^^
Carine^^ (it's a she) |
