| "Saiyan Style" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please update soon! I'm loving this fic and poor Vegeta having been turned away by Goku. *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: hitchhiker On: October 28, 2003 11:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love where you're going with this fic!! plz make it as long as you want to: just plz plz plz update!! I can't wait to see how goku and veggie get together! You've done the characters really well and they all seem totally in-character. Anyway, i love you fic and please updae again soon! (not original i know, but true none the less!)
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: October 08, 2003 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAHHHHH THAT WAS CRUEL AND UNUSUAL PUNISHMENT. I LOVED IT. Please hurry and update, dont leave me hangin, K! Chow Babe ;)
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Reviewed By: Dark Fate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2003 06:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm... I really like this fic so far. You portray the characters quite well. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 15:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I must agree with manawolf, the red text is quite distracting. That said, I look forward to seeing *your* input into the DBZ events. Don't worry about moving away from the original storyline, that's the best part of most fics! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 23:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okaaay.... it's a narration of an episode. o_0 I really fail to see what's different or new here...
You really should skip the colors, though - they're not formatted correctly & cause more confusion than clarification. |
