| "Not that He Cared" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2012 23:26 EST
Comment/Review:
Nice story but he was waaaayyy off character. He would never break down and cry like that. |
Title: hmmm.
Reviewed By: abercrombielvr07 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2009 03:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would say that this story is pretty good. I really enjoyed the sweetness that Kagome and Sesshy share and the warmth that is obviously laced perfectly in this story. However, no matter what the situation, no matter what has happened, Sesshomaru DOES NOT cry. It made me cringe when Sesshomaru curled in a ball, hugged a plushie, and cried himself into two week's worth of sleep when he should've been sad, but taking it out with Tokijin on a few trees. I could totally see him walking around in a depressed stupor or abusing Jaken, but crying with a plushie? I'm sorry but making Sesshomaru cry, unless it's one tear running down a STOIC face, is horrible OOC. But other than that, this is a really good story. Just, next time, keep Sesshy stoic, but emotional, only make the emotional extremely internal. A word to the wise: Sesshy is a suffer in silence type of guy :) But again, great story. I can't wait to read more of your work because your grammer, style, and sweet plot lines make me smile! That is, until Sesshy cries! lol. Kudos on the great story! -Abercrombielvr07
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 22:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
it was so sweet but sessh was a bit of a wuss now if it was somebody else but not somebody off of inuyasha
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Title: I think i cried!
Reviewed By: IcyKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 06:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I....I...I AM AT A LOSS FOR WORDS!! i absolutly loved it!!!! i will read lots more of your writing!!!! *~*Ice*~*
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Reviewed By: kikyou2004 On: April 07, 2004 01:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic, i love how you had sesshomaru's defenses slowly break under the power of his love for kagome. That was an ingenius way of portraying his feelings. You should definitely write more, what happens in the aftermath of inu's discovery of the love he just lost? Does he try to win her back? You have to answer those questions.
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Reviewed By: i On: February 06, 2004 14:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT
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Reviewed By: Starry Dragon Knights [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 10:42 EST
Comment/Review:
love it! love it!! LOVE IT!!!
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Reviewed By: Imani Tabitha Agate Tendo On: October 03, 2003 16:37 EDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is so beautiful. a heartwarming yet heartachy story. please write more.
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Reviewed By: bise b On: June 22, 2003 17:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was amazing! damn! your awsome at writing. Sess. was a bit out of character but non the less it was awsome!! hope you write some more one shots. i love them! bye |
Reviewed By: Joe Diamonds On: June 20, 2003 04:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of writing: Amazing.
Spelling and grammer: Heart-warming.-_-;;;
Originality/Creativity: Great.
Enjoyment factor: FABULAS, SUPERB, OUTSTANDING!!!
Overall rating: pretty good...pretty darn good... |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: June 19, 2003 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. It was just...so heart-warming. It made me want to cry... I'm usually not this emotional though. -__- But anywho, it was great! Great, what am I talking about? IT WAS FABULOUS, SUPERB, OUTSTANDING!!! (and so on) ^____^ *Claps for your wonderful fanfiction* |
