| "Shadow and Crystal" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: inumaru12 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 16:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
OHH THAT'S GREAT PLEASE UPDATED! OH YA SHADOW IS MY FAVORITE PERSON! GO SHADOW
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Reviewed By: Krystal On: July 20, 2003 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was ok. But ya know I've seen better. Sorry if I'm flaming. And could you please change the name, My name is Krystal. Even though its not spelled Crystal its almost the same. AND I'M NOT DEAD!!! (~-~) |
Reviewed By: RedDevil7690 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, I went back through and read the rest of the fic and I gotta say, this is said. Its really annoying when theres an emotional situation and you put in 0_0 or LOL. Plus it was all to calm. Shadow calls the doctor, says his wife died and all that and the doctor just gose. "Oh ok, 3:45" like nothing happened. That is why Im lowering your rating. |
Reviewed By: RedDevil7690 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, no offense, but Shadow wouldt have lived falling through the atomsphere. So this fic couldn,t have really happened. |
