| "A demon has fallen" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: ;::D&L::; On: July 28, 2005 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DON'T LISTEN TO CHI! LONG LIVE PRIDESHIPPING!!!!!!!!!!!!! >.< CHI JUST REALLY PISSED ME OFF DAMNITT!!! ......... I'm sorry.... I'm a big fan of yaoi, romance, YGO, and prideshipping.......... Sorry about my swearing rant... I still think that that flame was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooo un needed!!!!!!! and im sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry (not to chi) about the swearing... plz coountinue!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^.^ NO FLAMES OR ELSE!!!!!
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Title: WTBF
Reviewed By: ;::Dark&Light::; On: July 28, 2005 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WHAT THE BLOODY FUCK!?!?!? WHAT'S CHI'S PROBLEM!?!?!?!? GRRRRRRRRRRR. >.< IT IS NOT SICK!!! IF YOU DON'T LIKE THIS FIC, DON'T BLOODY FLAME!!!!!!!!!!!! I think Blue September has a good point! Hey chi, if you don't like prideshipping, DON'T FUCKING READ IT!!!!! >.
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Title: Awwww, To Kawaii! ^-^
Reviewed By: ;::Dark&Light::; On: July 28, 2005 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWW, SO KAWAII!!! ^-^ I love this fic!!!! It's cool, has lemons and romance, and I think the part where Yami has a tail, wings and stuff is really cool! Please countinue! R&R people!!!! No flames!
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Reviewed By: silverdragon_0120 On: September 01, 2003 03:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah...... ok........ Yami's supposedly a Demon Lord, but he's the one who keeps getting on the bottom and is very much like Yugi....... Seto is the dominant male, pushy, protective, and horny.......... *nods approvingly* not bad. Yugi would fit better, the way you're portraying Yami. Cute either way....... |
Reviewed By: Jonez On: July 18, 2003 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good fic! I really like the whole Darks vs. Lights concept. Plzzz continue on with this! |
Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 10:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't listen to that fool! First of all, in Egypt is was customary for pharaohs to marry their own sisters. Secondly, it isn't uncommon in this day and age for cousins to marry in some countries. Look at Card Captor Sakura. Lee Meilin Rei and Lee Sayoran were cousins too and they were ENGAGED!! So that idiot who reviewed before needs to learn a little more about modern culture if they're going to continue calling themselves an anime fan.
As for the story itself, I thought the plot progessed a little too quickly in the first chapter, but I still enjoyed the story. Keep going at it! |
Reviewed By: Chi On: June 14, 2003 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is just sick. Yami and Seto are cousins for God's sake. |
