| "Pressure Point" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: AmyiXRogue On: August 12, 2005 18:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!! This ficv is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!! You dshould right abother chap!!!!! Toy couyld make amtyi the main charactor!
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Reviewed By: sonicscrendude On: February 19, 2005 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very short so i will make quick work of it. First of all THE GOOD: its interesting seeing tails as a sadistic killer and the storys depressing scenario may provoke some deep thinking... NAHHHH! next we come to, THE BAD: the entire thing is just too short, the writing isnt all too comprehensive, and how the hell did he get the semen in the socks?! Finally THE JUST PLAIN F%#KED UP: first of all, tails gets raped by a woman, he gets an orgasim from shooting someone, and WHAT THE HELL IS UP WITH THE SEMEN SOAKED SOCKS?!! Still, through all the wacky gore this one smokes an 8 out of ten
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Reviewed By: Hurricane On: June 14, 2003 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very sad ending. To bleak for some readers. But If you add more detail and make it longer, you have the chance to become a great writter |
