| "Body Heat" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic! it almost made me cry when i thought about how sad yugi was and how he could never be with Yami but then they meet in the soul room^_- i hope you write more fanfics like it your very good at it
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Reviewed By: Siura On: July 15, 2003 06:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
over all! i enjoyed that fic! it waz really sweet! i liked it! plz bring out more fics like that one! and that waz ur first fics! Good on you!
peace! Siura |
Reviewed By: Worsel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 22:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Beautiful job! Far better then my first lemon. *Grins at the memories*
~Lossa Love~ |
Reviewed By: thunder strom 905 On: June 21, 2003 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just loved this story it was so good . |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: June 18, 2003 16:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Helooo! Hai it was a very good lemon. I liked it a lot. *huge smile* ^____________^ You did a good job! I hope you have more fics out. Y&Y4Ever....
Ja ne!^-^ |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 05:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
mmm..lemony goodness |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 20:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was really good. I liked it. Good job! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 14:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey--
hooray, a yami/yugi lemon! they are my fav. pairing. that was so HOT! i would have never guessed that is was your first. wonderful descriptions of their emotions and actions. i'm very impressed! good luck in your contest!
can't wait to see more from you! keep writin'!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 06:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
*claps* Bravo! Very nice, well done. That was better than most all of my lemons (not that I have any posted for you to see, yet.) You should be very proud of yourself, good luck on the contest!! |
