| "Bane of My Existence" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Title: Beautiful!
Reviewed By: Kat (iluvanimemore@hotmail.com) On: January 30, 2004 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this chapter! Jakotsu in this is hilarious and I'm glad his wish is about to come true. I think the Bankotsu/Kagome pairing is growing on me, thanks to you. Keep writing! Update soon!
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Title: Hold on a sec....
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 00:09 CST
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... which one is hotter in your book-- Sesshoumaru or Inuyasha?? Tell me... and THEN make that list! ;) I can't wait to read it! ^_^ Who is gonna be number one?? (Or number THREE, really) Your public wants to know. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *mm doesn't like her signing in anymore* On: January 30, 2004 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the new fic name-- it fits perfectly. I'm not sure if I remember what the original one meant... but I'm not gonna dwell on that now. *laughing at your shout-out* I want to see that!! *heh* You really do have a way of improving on my hentai imagination... *hehe* I have this danceclub thing going too. Meaning, I never go dancing (not since highschool), but even I used to entice men on the dance floor without being a slut. (is that possible?) I had a close call in a bar. By which I mean... Temptation is a wolf in sheep's clothing. Once my imagination gets going... there's no stopping the possiblities. (Writing, however, is a different matter;) Ban is SO a hottie. *heh* I loved the dance scene. I know both the songs, but.. maybe this headache is preventing me from remembering how they sound. *heh* Now that I think of it... all the sweetness cured my aching brain! Yay!!! I found the cure for headaches... waffy sexual tension. *heh* Great chapter, Eri. I wish I had a friend like Jak when I was still single to fix me up with his good looking older brother... *sigh* ^.~
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 03:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Completly loving this fic :) Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 03:15 CST
Comment/Review:
i just wanted to tell you something. I LOVE JANKOSTU!!!!!! and barely anyone knows who he is because it in the way way way later episodes, but FINALLY!! a fic with him in it, i cant read it now, but i will soon! and when i do, you'll get a review! lol. but now its time to sleep. Good night!
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Title: *singing*
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh baby, baby... *lol* Kagome in her Britney-like school girl outfit. *snickers* SO hilarious... (That song was a guilty pleasure of mine... a few of hers fit into that category, in fact) *grins* Pink bunnies... holy cow! Ban is definitely a hottie. A motorcycle suits him, alright. *snickers* I just love it when they have to SUFFER through the ride like that. (I've only ridden on motorcycles twice and neither of them were with a hot guy my age:( Liked the moonlit koi. They were a nice touch. (I got to see some huge ones when I was in Nevada last summer) I'm sorry... but hot guys and elevators... *blushes* I've got SUCH a hentai mind... I can't wait for you to post more. ^_^
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Title: Thanx! =D
Reviewed By: Nankinmai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 17:23 CST
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hehe ^^ thats gotta be the first chapter that was dedicated to me! thanks! =D i liked this chapter, gives a bit of angst about whats to come, and it just made me really curious about whether kagome really will leave (but i think she has to anyway) or if ban would follow her (which would be romantic!)... anyways, yeah, its really too bad about ADSALAD (took me a sec for figure what that stood for! ^^) but i did read the lastest chapter! although i couldnt figure out if it was getting near the end or if there was plenty more to come, cuz the few chapters before made it seem like its about to end soon... =\ anyways, lets hope you're able to update more before christmas (*grinning like a cheetah here*) and i'll try to send you a box of virtual brownies! not sure if you'll be able to eat it, but if i can find something else, i will, okay? take care of yourself!!! XD
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Reviewed By: Kagura-Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 09:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there! i just wanted to say how much i love this fic, and city by the bay! i can't remember if i reviewed that or not, i think so, but i'll do it later anyway. i love your writing style and i think Jak is kick-a**! (don't mind me, i'm weird) i also wanted to say that i hope you don't mind that i recommended city by the bay & a demon should act like a demon in my fic *blushes* i only recomend stories that i really love, so i guess it's a compliment if ya wanted to take it that way i guess. o well, i'll stop my rambling and put you outta your misery. well, anywho...Ja ne!
always~ Kagura-hime aka jen |
Reviewed By: r12 On: July 23, 2003 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more people like you! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh!! I forget to tell you that Kagome rocks!! ...Ban's world. XD
*though she didn't recognize the songs, she got a kick out of making up new music/tempos for the songs*
I'd still like to read more of this prequel. :) But keep in mind that I can't wait for her and Sessy, though. ^.~ What can I say... he's a GOD! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles* Ban is so cute, hot, sexy, and sweet... but he still doesn't hold a candle to Sessy!! *thinks of Ban's sweaty muscles beneath the tanktop... and her tanktop fetish* On the other hand... *runs away*
*a note flutters to the ground, saying*
"Write more!! ^_^ *sniffles* That's all for the payback? Waaah!! Me wants more Ban suffering!!" |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks* Was it hot in that closet or was it just me?
*whistles* Ban was a (can't spell) pederass. (still can't spell) *lol* Can't wait for more! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 09:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi sweetie! :)
I'm reviewing instead of replying to you email, hope that's okay with you? :)
Anyway, I loved this chapter as much as the first! :) The songs fit in perfectly and it was sooooo sweet to read about Jak and Kag!!! That's the way friendship should be! *dreamy sigh*
And then, when Ban was a little jealous... *grins* Ahhh, young love! ;)
I liked it when Kagome was singing and watching Ban - it was so sweet and realistic! It felt very real, the way they would look at each other and everything... :)
And then... her revenge! *snickers* He deserved it - big time! ;)
*huggles*
//J |
Reviewed By: Kain-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic so far! It really deserves a thousand reviews (not being a suck of or anything of that sort- it's just the truth! You know what I mean.) .
I like the whole Kikyo/Suikotsu thing...even though I am not much of a Kikyo fan.
Well, please update soon, I can't wait to see what you have in store next. |
Reviewed By: Ria On: June 15, 2003 19:22 CDT
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Finally I found someone that made a fic on Bankotsu!!!! Arigato! Please write more! |
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