Reviewed By: trapt_tears On: July 14, 2003 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it!! it introduced and followed all the characters with the greatest of detail, and continued the story from multiple POVs, and that i like. i thought it was great, and that you should really continue! its kinda hard to find any non-yaoi FF fanfics, but that arent afraid to include the alcahol or hotel room. i cant wait for the next chapter. it really sounds like this could be fun!! |
