| "The one" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 11:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I noticed that no one has reviewed this, so I thought I would. It's good, but I think you jump around a bit to much. Something happens, then *zoop* new scene, which is all well and good on occassion, but not contantly. I hope this helps. I am going to keep reading now because the story is very intriguing. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: DestroyerX On: August 10, 2003 07:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man it is really good but except for the cliffhanger.
email me when the latest chapters comes out.
@t moondestroyerx@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: icychic [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic but it is too short. update as soon as possible cuz u left a cliffhanger.
icychic |
Reviewed By: icychic [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic but it is too short. update as soon as possible cuz u left a cliffhanger.
icychic |
Reviewed By: moonearthgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 09:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it but that was harsh what happened but COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
