"Sing Down the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Queen of Eternal Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 18:47 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: it'-it's soooo cuteeee continue as soon as possiblle ppllzz |
Reviewed By: QueenOfGames On: July 11, 2003 22:23 CDT Comment/Review: ::crosses eyes:: Noooo! It was the same chapter ::cries:: WHYYYYYYYYYYYY??? Well lol I liked the one you posted lol!!
The *Queen Of Games* |
Reviewed By: Hermeny On: June 18, 2003 22:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Really like this fic! Can't wait until the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Cool_Kid On: June 17, 2003 17:40 CDT Comment/Review: awsome. please continue writing.
change nothing you are doing great!! |
Reviewed By: MadameRuby [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 17:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: O.O wow... A few notes:
I'm not 100% sure, but I do believe Ryou's father's name is James Bakura. other than that one little detail, I think it was fairly well-written. It seemed to me that there was a lot of space in between each line, though. (although maybe it was just my computer... :-P) Please post another chapter, 'tis very good.
Madame Ruby, insane authoress extraordinaire |